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Subject: Jun like artwork

I Jub Jub I

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This is a work in progress of a Spartan II

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  • 08.09.2010 2:25 PM PDT

It's really hard to recognize what you have drawn.

imo you should draw a complete line version of what you want to draw, instead of color some random parts. Nothing can damage a picture so much like strange proportions or wrong lights/shadows :)

  • 08.09.2010 2:37 PM PDT

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I think it looks badass. Good work. Actually now that I look at it a little more, you should stick it in photoshop or something and brighten it up a little.

  • 08.09.2010 2:58 PM PDT

I Jub Jub I

I'm coming Bungie, I will join your movement of world domination.

I drew this back at when reach was announced so I was inspired by Jun's concept art, it doesn't look like him at all now.

But I don't see why mine proportions are bad?:)

I saw your Carter his arms and hands are tiny, and head waay to big. You should have drawn some more of his body imo.

But the DMR and helmet looks great.

check out my gallery, i'm not bad at proportions and shading.

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  • 08.09.2010 3:19 PM PDT
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Helmet was good, everything else was sloppy though. Not good proportions, his stance was too forced, no detail. It needs work, and a lot of it. Using a reference, not even one like that drawing, helps a lot.

  • 08.09.2010 6:38 PM PDT

Just something: Make sure you give his legs the same feel you gave his upper body, that gritty feeling. It cant just be flat out gray. Add some marks, some noise.

  • 08.12.2010 7:50 PM PDT