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Kensai entered the cave she could feel the history of the place... (to keep the game alive)

  • 08.18.2004 8:21 PM PDT
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seraph are you still on?

  • 08.18.2004 9:08 PM PDT
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NO ONE EVER CARES WHAT I DO!!!!!

Oops , Caps lock, heh heh...

Ahem, Shade and the Space Marines meet up with BE 1000's forces and the Predators.

They then go off to the cave to find Kensai.

(BTW, my Space Marines are highly trained, dangerous soldiers. They wear Combat suits like the ones in Starcraft, but are smarter :P They have intermediate mental training, so they could be of use here. They also have pretty big guns and grenades too.)

  • 08.18.2004 11:10 PM PDT
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So sorry I haven't been on much guys, especially Seraph. I wanted to finish the story, but I'm bogged down to my neck in work for an AP class I'm taking right now over the summer. Keep going, I guess, and I'll drop in when I can. Basically though, Seraph, I let you go and get posessed or whatever you'd like to call it by the orbs to teach you a lesson. I was going to go up with you and destroy the orbs with my sword. That is their test, because the only one that could withstand the blade would be the original, the one I gave you. Then I could obtain it and rework the succesion of Praetor by getting rid of the orb and transferring it's power into my sword, which has the essence of the previous Dolorous in it, gathered from the star he created to stop the swarm. It fluctuates from ice blue to white to a burning hot yellow, as his eyes did. Basically, the character I have now is him from some time before he died, sent from a parallel universe by the Jjarro, the race the Praetors serve. The sword hilt was indeed the same as the original Dolorous (back from Laser War: The New Age) that died destroying the godsends. It's essence was extinguished because it's first master was gone, yet it gained power again from the star. So... *deep breath* if you could, I will narrate:

I lead Kensai to the peak of the tower, shrouded in darkness and all manner of terror. Yet the sword hilt ignited into a blazing glory that drove all shadows away, impenitrable as a star that brightens with the coming of the evening. One by one, I thrust my blade through each of the spheres, which shattered into crystalline fragments that echoed off the shrouded floor. One at last remained... A small grimace twisted my face as I turned to Kensai.

"Now you will witness the completion of the circle, the cycle that will end once more with my ultimate demise, as it was and always will, until the coming of the Beginning. Remember your faults, but not as your own. They plague all of your people, indeed, every being in existence. For in every being, there is capacity to do both good or evil. Some will always choose either side, yet it is for those few, those who tip the scales, that decide the fate of all those who follow them. In that way, we are all the determining factor. We can all make a difference, for we all can tip the scale one way or the other. The difference between the hero and those who stand behind him is not his inherent virtue, but the virtue given him. You have been given much, and much is required of you. I suggest you use your assets wisely. No action concieved does not bear consequence. I will be watching. Farewell, not for the last time..."

And with that, I thrust my sword into the final sphere, which is set ablaze instantly. You can not look for long because of the intense light and heat that seems to continue growing with each passing moment. You force yourself to turn one last time to behold two flaming eyes, shining as stars themselves in all their fury.

And then. Nothing. You find yourself on the ground outside the tower. Or at least, if there were a tower anymore... Nothing remains, except a charred and ash ridden spot of ground, and the initials marked within by a pattern that had not been scorched.

CMD

You look up to behold a ship of massive proportions, sleek as death itself, and just as silent. Just as soon as you can make out anything more than it's sprawling shillouette, it vanishes with a burst of speed, and a flash of light somewhere in the cold claw of space.

  • 08.19.2004 2:15 AM PDT
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That was hella tight Dolorous.

  • 08.19.2004 6:31 AM PDT
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Yea that was good but you traped my solders in there.

  • 08.19.2004 9:44 AM PDT
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Hi i am back. Excellent writing Dolorus. Okay just to fit it in with what happened i had come back from the cave then it was Dolorus' plot. (btw) Kensai stared up at the ship. The sun reflecting off its sleeek, black surfaces making a myriad of colours. Kensai turned away by the blinding flash and when she looked back the ship was gone. She looked around at the ruins and the men still on the beach. "I will not forget, your lesson." Kensai pledges into the cold air. She felt hope that this threat was over. Within grew a deeping hate, as if she had lost brethern to a foe. She then knew that man had not destroyed all the orbs. aS she stared down at the markings on her flesh... Kensai walked towards one of the soldiers. She drew a blade from his sheath. Then stabeed herself in the heart. She felt warm blood wash over her hand and body. inside her mind she could her the dieing screams of the symbionte that echoed alongside her own. As her dead body slummped to the ground... With her eyesite fading she sees black smoke curl around the beach a great opening appeared there in the opening she saw the ruined city... This realm was collapsing...

[Edited on 8/19/2004 10:50:25 AM]

  • 08.19.2004 10:47 AM PDT
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Time to make a new prologue. Hehe

  • 08.19.2004 10:58 AM PDT
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Hi im back what did i miss

  • 08.19.2004 11:13 AM PDT
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*pushes big red button*

*sounds of rockets lifting off and air raid sirens wail*

  • 08.19.2004 11:17 AM PDT
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Just read my post that is all that is happened i am making my characters new prologue right now...

  • 08.19.2004 11:17 AM PDT
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My men run twoards the exit draging Kensais bodie with them.They all exit Kensai is still barely alive but dies in a coma 1 week later.The solders are debrifed.

[Edited on 8/19/2004 11:18:43 AM]

  • 08.19.2004 11:18 AM PDT
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These events take place two years after the destruction of the orbs…

A girl only around 19 years of age opened her eyes. She stared out into a sea of blue she saw in front of her 3 humanoid beings. Memories began to come back to her. Her name was Kensai, she then remembered what she thought was her final moments…
The blade slicing into her heart, the warm blood washing over her she remembered the orbs and the man that destroyed them…

One of the humanoids his body twisted by the bio-fluid and the tank around her, pressed a button on a hovering command pod. Kensai felt cords and wires and tubes break away and disengage themselves from her body. Her body shock with simulated pain as she felt energy rush into her. Now floating in the fluid she stared down at her nude body. Her bluish, black hair floating around her, her skin was a pale almost blue colour. Odd straight black lines and small black holes appeared occasionally on her skin.

Kensai could not fully understand that when the bio-tube opened. She fell forward carried out by the liquid onto the cold ground. She could not move… Her eyes looked up to the beings around her. They were tall humanoids with a face that reminded her of Anubis from ancient Old Terra mythology. They were lean body with long legs that ended on two hooves that were connected to each other.

One of them spoke in odd dialect (think like what the predator’s sound like when they have there helmets on). One of the creatures walked away. While another reached down and began to press down on her back. She felt something come out from her skin… It was then what looked like an elder of there kind placed a canister on the device as it fell back underneath her skin. Kensai mind whirred with trying to understand what had happened to her. The other creature returned with a box. Inside was an assortment of what look like body armour and clothing. They flipped her over on her back and began to place the pieces on her skin. They stuck to her skin with a click. Clothing was slid onto her petite frame to cover her.

She then felt energy rush to her arms and legs. She stood up and faced them even though she was tall they were more then a head taller then her… She knew that the only way to survive was to do what they wished. The creatures began to talk in there language somehow she understood them, “You are Kensai #184, you will work for our company, you are an assassin android”…

  • 08.19.2004 11:24 AM PDT
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Years pass without conflict.Blue elite 1000 meets a woman and eventualy marrys her.(dont worry theres gonna be somthing good coming up)

  • 08.19.2004 11:25 AM PDT
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What you think of my prologue so far there is going to be more of it just gotta wright it...

[Edited on 8/19/2004 11:27:30 AM]

  • 08.19.2004 11:27 AM PDT
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its good

  • 08.19.2004 11:28 AM PDT
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thanks

  • 08.19.2004 11:29 AM PDT
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As the weeks pass, Kensai begins to learn more about what happened. These people called the Yekalaths are masters of bio-mechanical and biological technology. Almost two years ago a bio-team found a sample of her blood and was able by there advance biological teams extrapolate from the DNA code memories and personalities of her which remain dormant in genes. They then placed this information into a dormant android system and created her, she was the first successful version…

Kensai finds out this world is governed by large multi-corp companies that fight for control. There are a few humans on this world but they are more simply oddities to be stared at by the public… Human androids like her are made because it is easier to get them into high-security companies. Since humans are considered lower forms of life but are welcomed as a thing to admire…

  • 08.19.2004 11:36 AM PDT
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Kensai begins rigours training to take her android body to the maximum level of its capabilities. She also trains in the weaponry these people had created. Soon it would be her first mission…

  • 08.19.2004 11:39 AM PDT
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One of my generals aproches me and tels me that a inhabitol planet has been discoverd.I begin standerd procedur for new planets(sending troops in).

  • 08.19.2004 11:45 AM PDT
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Kensai is lead down the long corridor to Zalmeerra the CEO of this company to be briefed on her first mission… Three hours latter she stood beside a Yekalath business men from a rival company. She was an oddity date for a ball. The man did not even now she was an android. The markings were covered in a full length black dress that shimmered with micro lights. She was told to not speak or address any one she was simply there for the people to admire… As the hours pass she whispered into the Yekalath ear in their language, “Sire, I grow weary, shall we retreat to our room.”

Kensai lead the man to his quarters. As she closes the door and slipped out of her dress… a single strand of stilsa wire dangled down from a hidden hole on her wrist. She held the other end of the stilsa wire with her other hand and walked towards the man. She wrapped her arms around his neck in a hug and tugged. Her bio-skin was covered in green blood. She quickly cleaned up the blood and showered the blood off. Kensai then leaped out of the 20 story window. She landed with a thud in the cold snow. She walked out into a clearing and set off her transmitter. Within minutes a hopper came and picked her up…

  • 08.19.2004 11:54 AM PDT
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My character is Gary, he forms a group of people that are pissed at the government of the future. He gives them theese orders:
"Alright men, it's time to take action, anyone with a ship should support us by flying into the air and shooting stuff,now for everyone else, secure a weapon and fire wildly into the air!"


But, then they are all arrested a week later after they shot someone's toe off.
The end.

  • 08.19.2004 11:58 AM PDT
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As the days pass rumours spread out as to the disappearance of the business man. Kensai was lead to the bay where a sleek space craft was held in place by a system of tubes and steel wire. Zalmeerra stood beside her. “A gift for a job well done,” she began to examine the craft it was amazingly slick and aerodynamic she did not understand how it could fly though it appeared to have no engines… It was then that red warning lights flashed across the bay. They were under attack…

  • 08.19.2004 12:01 PM PDT
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My ship exited slipstream and started deploying dropships.

  • 08.19.2004 12:05 PM PDT
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Kensai ran through the hallways burning holes were all that was left of some and green blood. As she reaches the armoury she strips out of her work crew clothing and attached her body armour and put on her battle clothing. She attached weapons to her and slung weapons over her. As she stepped out of the armoury she saw Lillith a human she was already covered in green blood her weapons smoking from over use. Lillith was a girl of 17 years old she had many mental diseases but was a ruthless fighter. She had little or no remorse and could not stand any human touch. Kensai saw the battle was going badly. The enemy wore advance full body armour. There weapons simply bounced off their shields. Kensai raced towards her ship. This was a lost battle…

  • 08.19.2004 12:08 PM PDT