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Subject: (Fan Fic) The UNSC Frigate BlueDwarf (not done) Ch 1-5 are done

This story Takes place a year after the events on The Ark. The Humans, Elites, and Grunts have become allies to stop any reformation of the covenant. At this time a large fleet of UNSC/Elite ships are hunting down the Brutes in hope of stopping there tribes from teaming up and fighting back at full force. Resonantly the fleet was in a small skirmish against suicidal brutes. They lost 2 ships (or so they thought) In this battle. One of the ships how ever wasn't lost. The BlueDwarf. A small ship now in command by Jack Richards, A spartan 3 who has a way of getting in trouble but is the most qualified as a UNSC Frigate Pilot. Follow him and his crew as they try to rejoin the fleet.... and stay alive.


Night is the start
Night is the beginning...
Once again we're lost, left behind by the fleet, and out of power. Slash, our Professor, and our Doctor have told us that the fuel rod cannon that the Elites gave us to study can be used to re-fuel us with it's ammo, but that's not the problem. The problem is that out ship's left engine was torn in half by a kamikaze Brute in a banshee filled with Plasma grenades. I mean really, I thought those little gas snorting midgets were the only ones dumb enough to kill themselves.

Now I'm getting scared. If the brutes have started working together again, the pools of blood will only grow. The Elites said we were only halfway there and yet we've already lost fifty ships out of our fleet of five hundred. While not many in our fleet have been shot down it's still a depressing fact.

Our ship was the smallest in the fleet and was only going to be used as a well-armored troop getaway. Our Captain Alf died just yesterday from his injuries. Bringing our total dead to 4 out of 9. That just leaves me (the new captain), Slash (I already told you what he was), Gregory (our weapons Specialist), Jenny (my girl and our sniper), and Cleve (a simple spartan recruit who lost his brother to those suicidal brutes two days ago and hasn't spoken since). Five out of nine! What the hell kept us from dying? Jenny says it's just the fact that I figured out how to use our ship's MAC Cannon. I dont think pressing 10 random buttons counts. While the crew sleeps in the hangar (our ship's too small for actual barracks). Jenny and I have our fun in the control room for the night. Chess gone wrong. "BANG" man I just lost my queen. End of log for the night over this unknown planet.

Day 1
Today Gregory and Slash kept fighting over what to do about are air supply. Its gotten to low and Gregory thinks we sould resupply it on the planet were flying over. Slash says no because we would ether half to land on the surface (which could give us extra Damage and make it harder to repair) or we just hover over the surface which will deplete are fuel. Im just confused on how they would know if it had air or not if we haven't been on it yet. To me the only reason why they are actually fighting is because Gregory is just a oddly big and strong marine while Slash is a spartan. The 2 have hated each other for that one fact. Gregory was given spartan armor because regular marine armor wasn't big anuf for him. So hes the only one of us who isn't a spartan. SO I brake the fight up and choose. "Were going to land on the planet nuf said". Slash:"WHAT! Sir, we dont have any materials to repair are ship as it is and we may get more damage"
Me: "Shut it! Were just going down to check it out. For all we know there isn't any air so were going to hover over for a while and if there is air we will land and scout the area."
Slash:"Yes Sir".
Gregory:"The big man wins yet again..... Oh Yes sir".
We had flown down to the planet to find out the air is air and the planet is filled with flat meadows perfect for landing with out to much damage. We flew down and landed.
Jenny:"You guys look for food ill look around"
She left with out me giving her permission shes always doing this and it makes it hard to look like a captain or a higher ranked official. But thats why I love her.
An Hours past, Shes never gone scouting this long.
As me and Cleve make dinner on the ship we hear a yell
"JACKALS"
Me and Cleve look out the window and see jenny running from 10 jackals.
Me: "Cleve grab your pistol"
We head down to see Slash and Gregory already firing there DMR's. The jackals were easy kills but what were they doing not just here but chasing jenny.
Jenny:"Ahhg"
Me:"Whats wrong"
Jenny:"Those things shot my arm good Jack"
Slash:"Just a small plasma burn she'll be ok but she needs to rest but in the mean time, Jen mind telling us what happened"
Jenny:"Ahg fine ill try. While I was scouting the area I found a small skirmish between some grunts and jackals and I sorta helped out the grunts. The jackals didn't like that as you can see"
Gregory:"Damn, the covies are in cause, the elites are killing off the brutes, And the prophets have disappeared from the galaxy. We are Screwed some were in that picture"


That's it for log 2 I hope Jenny is ok.

[Edited on 10.16.2010 2:33 PM PDT]

  • 10.04.2010 6:49 PM PDT
Subject: (Fan Fic) The UNSC Frigate BlueDwarf (not done) Ch 1-3 are done

Log 3

Today I have sent Gregory and Cleve to go find the grunts camp.
Me and Slash have been looking over Jenny. Slash has told me that the plasma shot that hit her arm is healing fast but she wont wake up till tomorrow. This mean we half to stay while Gregory and Cleve get to find the Grunts. I think this will be good for Cleve seeing as he enjoys Grunts. Don't see why. There like little crabs to me. God im board with out Gregory. At least the 2 of us can arm wrestle to prove who's stronger. A Spartan or a marine in Spartan armor. To bad he normally wins. Jenny's out cold and Slash never does any thing fun. I cant believe im thinking like this. Like a child who just wants to play. Oh what the hell, Bugging Slash wont end the world.
Me:"Hay Slash what are ya doing"
Slash:"Fixing the Falcon"
Me:"Are Falcon is broken?"
Slash:"Yes your girl friend got up a little dizzy and got up before she sould of"
Me:"Let me get this strait. Jenny got up and was dizzy. But what does this half to do with the falcon?"
Slash:"She grabbed her rifle and shot the engine"
Me:"Why"
Slash:"Im not sure, I just new if she hadn't of been contained she would of blown up the ship"
Me:"Ok that makes little sense but ok. Where is she"
Slash: "Behind the stare case"
She looked peaceful but almost dead. I was going to ask what Slash used to knock her out but then I saw the dented propane bottle. It was ether her head was harder then I thought or that was Slashes sick humor at work. *Brescushing*
Me:"Slash I gota take this"
Slash:"Fine"
I walked out of the hanger just so I wouldn't half to go through a story about how we sould have a hornet or how we deserve a tank.
Me:"Yes"
Gregory:"Its me we found the grunts just 7 klicks north of us"
Me:"Good Have they agreed to help us repair the engine"
Gregory:"Yes, but there's a catch"
Me:"What"
Gregory:"Destroy the Jackals camp just 3 klicks from us to the east. Jack im not so sure about it, the grunts are saying that there's a good 300 Jackals there and"
Me:"And What! Were Spartans!"
Gregory:"Well you might be, But I ain't. And just because your Spartans doesn't make you gods"
Me:"You may just be a marine in Spartan armor, But Damn your the toughest person iv ever seen. Not to mention we got to get you back to your daughter and if we gotta kill some jackals to make sure we all get home then so be it"
Gregory:"Fine me and Cleve are coming back so we can get armored up, fed, and rested"
Me:"Oh right hows Cleve doing"
Gregory:"Good but after he tried some of these Zap-Jellies he barfed, But the Grunts got a kick out of it. So ya we will be returning"
Me:"Got it see you when you get back"
Zap-Jellies, What the hell is that. Oh well I better make some dinner for every one. But I gotta look at the files first to record the KIA's. Iv been putting it off for far to long.
Horn:Spartan 3. Family:None. Skill:Reclaimer. Rank:Sergeant. Status:KIA.
Alf:Spartan 3. Family:None. Skill:Captain. Rank:Lt. Colonel Grade 3. Status:KIA.
Micheal:Spartan 3. Family:None. Skill:engineer. Rank:Corporal. Status:KIA.
Daric:Spartan 3. Family:Brother Cleve. Skill:Close Combat. Rank:Captain. Status:KIA.
Gregory:Marine. Family:Wife Alice, Daughter Zon. Skill:Heavy Weaponry. Rank:Warrant Officer Grade 3. Status:IA.
Jenny:Spartan 3. Family:None. Skill:Long Range. Rank:Warrant Officer. Status:IA.
Jack:Spartan 3. Family:None. Skill:Mid Range. Rank:Lt. Colonel. Status:IA.
Slash:Spartan 3. Family:None. Skill:Surgeon. Rank:Major. Status:IA.
Cleve:Spartan 3. Family:Brother Daric. Skill:Translator. Rank:Recruit. Status:IA.
Odd, Cleve's a translator. We have been serving with him for a whole 2 months and none of us knew. The file is a little blank thou. His main file says he under stands every Earth and Covie language. That may be why he was sent with the fleet. ?_? Hmmm. He hasn't been given the proper Spartan Training. He only has been trained with the magnum and DMR. This makes little sense. I guess I will half to ask him when He gets back.
That ends log 3

Log 4
Day of Prep
Gregory came back with Cleve not so long after Jenny woke up. Once she woke up and Gregory and Cleve came back we went strait to battle plans.
Me:"Ok the Jackals are just 3 Klicks east from us and to get help to get off this rock we gotta kill every last one. There is a large mountain between us and them. It was at one time a Grunt mine. Now its a Jackal out post. They have Alert systems every were in the area but its the best place for us to have a battle with the jackals"
Gregory:"Ok so we know were we are going to battle but whats the plan"
Me:"Simple, Slash your going to go around the mountain first in the Falcon with its cloaking on. You will give us a report on what where up against. Then head over to the Grunts to tell them where about to battle"
Jenny:"So the doc gets a ticket out of the fight while we risk are skins"
Me:"No, see if we get injured he will come in and pick us up. Once he has gotten to the grunts we will get to the mine and fight"
Slash:"What if I fail and die or some dumb stuff like that"
Me:"We go on with the plan no matter what. If you die that just means we wont get an air lift"
Slash:"That's harsh but were Spartans the missions we do are almost always suicidal"
Gregory:"High chance of failure, Great chance of death, What are we waiting for"
Me:"The Grim ripper him self"
Slash:"Ill toast to that"
Gregory:"Hahahahaha. Ill grab my beer then and are last party will be a good drink"

As the others drank I walked over to Cleve who was sitting in the corner listening to us while looking at a picture of his brother.
Me:"So do you think your up for this"
Cleve:"No. Im not even properly trained for a battle like this"
Me:"Its ok. I saw your file. You aren't trained anuf with any weapon to actually do this. But I would rather have you to cover my back then any Elite"
Cleve:"Thanks captain. I think im ready"
I handed him a pistol and he understood well. I turned back to look at the others.
Me:"Its time we left get your guns ready and lets head out"
End of this log may we get back home in peace.



[Edited on 10.12.2010 3:14 PM PDT]

  • 10.04.2010 6:49 PM PDT
Subject: (Fan Fic) The UNSC Frigate BlueDwarf (not done) Ch 1-5 are done

log 5
Hell has 4 letters

Me:"Slash. Here is a snack. May you fly safely."
Slash:"And may you fight safely"

As he flew out the hanger Cleve ran up to me with the radio. He must of been running hard because he was so out of breath he fell down. I picked up the radio wondering why he had brought it to me. Then it turned on with a crack.

U.K.V.:Hello is any one there. Hello is any one there, this is Commander Rolek of the UNSC GoldFire responding to your distress call.
Distress call? I dont remember sending a distress call and wait Rolek that names sounds familiar.
Me:"Commander yes we need help are frigates left engine was blown off in a battle not to long ago and were about to go fight a large army of jackals."
Rolek:"We cant repair your engines but we can give you areal support. Tell us the cords of this battle and I will send some drop pods your way.
Me:"That giant valley of ice just a few klicks from us"
Rolek:"I see it, I will send the drop pods when you give me a call back"
Me:"thanks"

I then went to the command dock were every one was getting ready.

Jenny:"So Jack, were ready, when are we leaving"
Me:"After you put this chip in your helmet"

Every one stared with curiosity.

Cleve:"What is it" He said in a stuttering voice as if he spoke to load he would be shot.
Me:"nothing to worry, Slash made these for us to generate a stronger shield on are armor. They will keep us alive"
Gregory:"Good I would hate to die before killing some jackal scum.

We then left with Gregory carrying are ammunition like an ox. With no time at all we climbed the mountain and as soon as we entered the valley Slash called us.
Slash:"You must of entered the valley because the jackals are leaving there base. Seem to only be scouts how ever nothing more."
There already coming, How they couldn't of been expecting us could they.
Me:"Fine, we will be ready you can go to the grunts now"
Slash:"No im staying so I can tell you every thing that may come"
Me:"Fine just dont stay long"

Me:"Gregory put the ammo case down we will be fighting soon"

Soon was right. As soon as those words came out of my mouth 2 phantom came over the other side of the mountain and the battle begun. The phantoms were quick to drop off the jackals and shoot a few times at us. They left as quickly as they came.
How ever just like slash said they were scouts nothing more and we killed them quick.

Slash:"More are coming this time bringing some actual soldiers"

There doing this faster then they sould. The battle raged till the 5th wave when Slash called again.
Slash:"Guys, the Jackals aren't alone"
Me:"What do you mean"
Slash:"Brutes"

Crap, thats not good. a short probably easy to win battle just got a lot harder.
As the brutes came backed up by jackals we fell back a little for cover.

Me:"Rolek send down those pods. 3 if you can"
Rolek:"Ok here they come"

The pods dropped. One humorously landed on a brute and just made the Jackals and Brutes stare at it. The other 2 landed near us.

Gregory:"Who did you just call"
Me"A Commander of a frigate that has come to help"
Jenny:"He did more then help he killed a Brute for us"

Gregory soon opened the pod to find a un mounted turret.

Gregory:"Time to show those apes whos boss"

He turned at the group of jackals and brutes who were still in aw that a pod had come from the heavens and killed one of there brothers. All it toulk was that and the large group suddenly fell to the ground. A whole clip of bullets from that turret wiped out the entire group.
Gregory:"That's how the UNSC Does business"

The group was large indeed and a phantom hadn't come in a while. Did we win.

Me:"Check the body's there may be one thing that lived"

We checked and there was. A Jackal who was dieing fast and luckily cleve was the one to find him. Cleve quickly removed his helmet so he could speak clearer to the jackal.
Clip chur dona grupume, spoke Cleve and the jackal replied, Escona porgan gsona ecscrenson. Sadly the jackal then died and Cleve shed a tear
Cleve:"More are coming, and from what he says, Its there generals.

Soon Slash called and the news was as Cleve said.

Slash:"There are some phantoms coming with chieftain and some... WHAT THE OH GOD"
Me:"What is it Slash"
Slash:"Hunters"

The radio was loud and every one heard. We got ready for the worst.
Slash:"Im gona follow it that seems to be the last from there base any how"
Me:"Fine but dont do any thing risky"

Rolek:"Hay we have the air strike ready do you need it. Also we sent you a targeter in one of those pods just mark were ever you need it and will send the bombers to do what they do best.

This guy seemed to be one step ahead and wouldn't you know it it was the one that landed on the brute"
Cleve:"Sir the pod has loads of bullet holes in it"
Me:"Darn, oh well open it so we can check it may still be working"
He opened it and wouldn't you know the target locater wasn't damaged.
Cleve:"Here you go sir"

Then the phantoms came. I aimed it towards a space just in front of the phantoms and watched as bombs rained down from a dark Longsword and destroy the phantoms and watched them crash and burn.

Jenny:"YES, you did it jack"
Me:"No we did it... all of us. Now Slash un cloak and pick me and Gregory up. We will then head to the Jackals camp to destroy it While Jenny and Cleve will wait here for a lift from a saviors"

Slash:"yes sir"
Once he had turned off the cloak and started coming down I saw a Green light in the smoke from the Phantom wreckage and it was growing.

Me:"Slash"

The light went up at Slash clearing the smoke from the Wreck showing that a hunter had lived. The blast was to fast and as fast as slash had un cloaked he burst into flames. crashing like the phantoms.

Gregory:"NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
He ran towards the hunter with all his anger. He was to angry and wasn't watching his surroundings. He lunged his fist with all his strength into the neck to the hunter and tore its head clean from the body killing it bloodily. But he wasn't watch his surroundings. A Brute chieftain who was berried under the wreckage climbed out and had grabbed its Hammer. It jumped out and hit Gregory clean on his head. It popped his shields and seemed as if it killed him. Jenny killed it quickly with her Sniper Rifle.
Me:"Cleve go check Gregory Ill go check to see if Slash is.... Still alive"

Hell was what we were in

Hell was what we were trying to leave.
End of log 5 a sad day of days to come.

[Edited on 10.17.2010 8:09 AM PDT]

  • 10.04.2010 6:50 PM PDT
Subject: (Fan Fic) The UNSC Frigate BlueDwarf (not done)

log 4

  • 10.04.2010 6:50 PM PDT

log 5 (last log)

  • 10.04.2010 6:51 PM PDT

Instead of 5 logs I may make 10

  • 10.05.2010 1:16 PM PDT

And so here at the end of my life, I do once again betray a former master. The path ahead is fraught with peril. But I will do all I can to keep it stable - keep you safe. I'm not so foolish to think this will absolve me of my sins. One life hardly balances billions.

First off, please go take an English class. Many, many words in this are wrongly used or used incorrectly. For example, instead of are it should be our. Second, if you are speaking from an elites point of view, they would know much more about canon, grunts, and things than they appear to. Please use halopedia to research everything before you post, because there is no way in hell a fuel rod could refuel an entire ship. Just sayin.

  • 10.05.2010 2:33 PM PDT


Posted by: Mendeciant Bias
First off, please go take an English class. Many, many words in this are wrongly used or used incorrectly. For example, instead of are it should be our. Second, if you are speaking from an elites point of view, they would know much more about canon, grunts, and things than they appear to. Please use halopedia to research everything before you post, because there is no way in hell a fuel rod could refuel an entire ship. Just sayin.


I know there wrongly used Im not much of a righter sadly but im trying to get better.
This is from a Group of Spartans point of view. They are in command of the smallest ship in a UNSC/Elite fleet called BlueDwarf. The fleet has been hunting the brutes down to stop there tribes from re grouping and attacking. On there journey they made allies with the grunts (just mentioning for future post). They just resonantly got in a battle with some brutes who blew off the BLueDwarfs left engines. The fleet left the BlueDwarf behind thinking it was blown up. (thats the back story to my story).

The ship runs off on Fusion Battery's (I forget there actual name). The Fuel Rod they were given oddly anuf had much ammo. (50 whole cases) There Doctor/Scientist was able to convert the ammo into fuel for the ship. That fixes there fual problems, but not that engine problems.
I hope this clears any thing up on whats going on so far in my story and dont worry Ill fix my grammar soon.

Also what do you think of the plot so far


[Edited on 10.05.2010 3:45 PM PDT]

  • 10.05.2010 3:44 PM PDT

-Gr33n Knight

My stories:

Streams of Fire

Jiralhanae

Night is the beginning...
Once again we're lost, left behind by the fleet, and out of power. Slash, our Professor, and our Doctor have told us that the fuel rod cannon that the Elites gave us to study can be used to re-fuel us with it's ammo, but that's not the problem. The problem is that out ship's left engine was torn in half by a kamikaze Brute in a banshee filled with Plasma grenades. I mean really, I thought those little gas snorting midgets were the only ones dumb enough to kill themselves.

Now I'm getting scared. If the brutes have started working together again, the pools of blood will only grow. The Elites said we were only halfway there and yet we've already lost fifty ships out of our fleet of five hundred. While not many in our fleet have been shot down it's still a depressing fact.

Our ship was the smallest in the fleet and was only going to be used as a well-armored troop getaway. Our Captain Alf died just yesterday from his injuries. Bringing our total dead to 4 out of 9. That just leaves me (the new captain), Slash (I already told you what he was), Gregory (our weapons Specialist), Jenny (my girl and our sniper), and Cleve (a simple spartan recruit who lost his brother to those suicidal brutes two days ago and hasn't spoken since). Five out of nine! What the hell kept us from dying? Jenny says it's just the fact that I figured out how to use our ship's MAC Cannon. I dont think pressing 10 random buttons counts but I am getting my reward for it. While the crew sleeps in the hangar (our ship's too small for actual barracks) she and I have our fun in the control room. Thank God for sound proof doors. End of log for the night over this unknown planet.
Much better. Interesting plot though. I don't think I've read anything about Marines being stranded on an otherwise empty ship...

  • 10.05.2010 4:01 PM PDT

thank you for helping me there.
and thanks I tried thinking of a plot no one has tried

sadly the only thing I could think of was a story about a war after the war in halo 3
did I at least do a good job of the plot for part 1 and 2

  • 10.05.2010 4:24 PM PDT

And so here at the end of my life, I do once again betray a former master. The path ahead is fraught with peril. But I will do all I can to keep it stable - keep you safe. I'm not so foolish to think this will absolve me of my sins. One life hardly balances billions.

Plot is good. You could lose the whole jenny thing though, in my opinion. If that is your backstory, you need to incorporate it into the actual story so people knows whats happening.

  • 10.05.2010 5:32 PM PDT


Posted by: Mendeciant Bias
Plot is good. You could lose the whole jenny thing though, in my opinion. If that is your backstory, you need to incorporate it into the actual story so people knows whats happening.

ok Iv added a Intro tell me what you think.
I know the jenny thing is cheesy but I thought it be a good add in.
Just asking but what do you think of the other characters

Also chapter 3 will be added later on today when I can get back on.

  • 10.06.2010 4:37 AM PDT

Finally Log 3 is dun
Im sorry it toulk so long but we have had roaming black outs all this week and Because of those I had to constantly remake the story
sorry it toulk so long

  • 10.09.2010 3:33 PM PDT

Wow a lot of talking isn't there lol

  • 10.10.2010 7:03 AM PDT

When I die please bury me deep!
Place an MA5 down by my feet!Don't cry for me, don't shed no tear!
Just pack my box with PT gear!
'Cuz one early morning 'bout zero-five!
The ground will rumble, there'll be lightning in the sky!
Don't you worry, don't come undone!It's just my ghost on a PT run!

It's alright but more work on the characters would be good and losing the Jenny thing. Keep trying!

  • 10.11.2010 12:35 AM PDT

ok Ill try and remove it

  • 10.11.2010 4:00 AM PDT

Log 4 is done

I hope you enjoy it

I may not make 10 logs like first planned but what ever happens happens

my biggest fear is halving to go over 10 but I dont think thats going to be a problem

  • 10.11.2010 7:07 PM PDT

so what yall think of log 4

  • 10.12.2010 3:09 PM PDT

so no one else likes the story
cant blame you
every thing after the first story is just talking

  • 10.13.2010 6:00 PM PDT

That was harsh to leave you know


and log 5 is up what do you think

  • 10.16.2010 1:23 PM PDT

so this is what un appreciated work feels like

  • 10.17.2010 8:19 AM PDT

chapter 6 will be out today or tomorrow if any one cares to know

  • 10.23.2010 6:55 AM PDT