- GhostRyderCA941
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"It is done. By my hands. The pyrrhic solution is ignited. All I have left is the quiet of space to lull me to sleep.
I will dream of you." - The Didact
I don't particularly care for the odd phrasing and changed chord progressions. Seems kinda cut and dry. Very nice try though.
Try working more on the harmony rather than melody though :-\