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Posted by: AssaultCommand
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Posted by: AssaultCommand
Posted by: Axe11154
Posted by: AssaultCommand
Posted by: Axe11154
beautiful
can you a well made writer look at my writing and tell me what you think is needed
I have 4 chapters done (there called logs in the story but you get it)
2 are on the first post and the other 2 are on the second.
MY story is called the The UNSC Frigate BlueDwarf
or mabe your friend AssaultCommand could help
as unlike you I have no chitter chat to help my writing
# [/quote]Do not advertise your story in other threads.
Do not speak like that about me, you could just have asked me myself.
POMC S117 is not my boss, and I'm only helping him because I like his story and his grammar and spelling skill aren't perfect. I would've probably helped you, but the way you talked about me as if I was property of POMC makes me feel the need to decline your request.
Have a nice day :)
How did I talk bad about you
when I say chitter chatter Im talking about how when 2 people talk and converse on a story or plot to make it better
I never once said he was your boss.
further more were in my brief talk did I ever say he owns you. I mean really just really.
and I was asking him because His thread was the first thing I saw. Then when I saw that you 2 were working together I just edited my post instead of adding another post so I wouldn't be spamming. You said: "or maybe your friend AssaultCommand can help."
You were talking about me and asking for my help without asking ME.
You were asking POMC for my help, and I do not belong to POMC, so he has no right to choose as to whether I have to help you or not.
I do, however, see that your English vocabulary, spelling and grammatical capacities are of such an inadequate magnitude that you could've meant something else, but you were too illiterate to write it down correctly. In that case, better your English and explain to me what you meant and I'll take everything back.
Once again, have a nice day :)
Simple as this
You and AssaultCommand seem to be good friends. I Thought you Might of been busy or just plain gone. and his time on the last post clearly stated that he was the more likely to be on so I indicated it the message tords him. I meant no disrespect simply indication of the most likely to answer first and if he wasn't up for the task he could tell you for me.
also just saying but if you look at the times of when I was adding logs, there with in mere seconds-minutes of each other.
making it to were they aren't bumps (well thats how it is on these forums because they move like mountains, however in the Reach forums it would be bumping.)
Just because people dont post dont mean they dont like it. I love some post be never comment unless its a friends, I want to make friends, or its just so damb good.
last thanks POMC for reading it and Im glad you liked it. Ill make log 5 sometime today and with your permission could I use one of your characters. Seeing as this takes place during the covie vs human war, and mine times place a little after. I would sort of tie are story's together in a small (and short) way.I understand that you may have assumed POMC was more likely to read your post, but that still doesn't fully justify why you asked him for me to help you and didn't just directly ask me for my help.
Oh, and just when I thought you'd outsmarted me somehow and had suddenly grown adequately proficient in grammar, vocabulary and spelling, you let me down and begin you're illiterate chatter again.
I do, however, take everything back that may have sounded offensive, but please, dear sir, consider taking a thorough course of the English language at an official educational office before you continue your attempt at writing a fan-fiction story. Once you've (truly) bettered your English, I promise to you I'll support you 100% and I may even make a PDF book for your story like the ones I made for my dear friend Wolverfrog's novels. Check them out in the top forum listing on the right when you go back to this forum's index.
The books I've done for him are 'True Sangheili' and 'Halo 3: Insurrection'.
Take your time to learn your English, it will pay off eventually.
//>AssaultCommand
Thank you for taking it back and will gladly read any thing you hand me. I am in fact taking English and dont care for it. I prefer to read and write for fun then to write or read for a actual reason. I can generally get my writing wright (lol see what I did :P) but for some reason or another I screw it up thinking I did something wrong (second guessing isn't healthy for a story). I will do as you said for it takes 4 to through a proper party as we say here in the country :P.