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Subject: [Novel] The Conflict of Harvest-Chapter 2 complete


Posted by: AssaultCommand
Posted by: Wolverfrog
Posted by: AssaultCommand

Hey, don't be condescending. Everyone starts off small; you should look at the Memoirs thread and see some of my early posts. I had appalling grammar and idiosyncratic ideas which made no sense.
Touché, but still, I was just trying to get my point across of the fact he was talking about me as if I weren't worth talking to... Yeah, I guess I was a bit harsh on him.
Posted by: Wolverfrog
You have to gently feed a flame oxygen for it to grow. Blasting it with a strong gust of wind will just extinguish it.
Nice metaphor! I would've probably used a bucket of water...
Posted by: Wolverfrog
We're all part of the fan fiction community here and shouldn't be hostile towards each other. Help one another out, and so unto others as you would have them do unto you.
I don't talk about people like that, asking for their services while at the same time fully ignoring their [possible] presence and the fact they'd read the very post you typed feeling left out and unimportant. But hey, I guess I also just wanted to see how well I could stretch my English vocabulary and grammatical capacity until I couldn't find any more utilitarian words to use.


; ;
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sniff sniff
I did'nt mean to make you feel left out. But that hurt when you said that you were using me as a test dummy for your English vocabulary and grammatical capacity.
How ever I deserve (I guess).
But Im still glad that we can put the past behind to wright a new future.

P.S.
POMC S117 Owns would Gregory fit into your story (dont kill him off thou as he must LIVE!!!)

P.S.S.
AssaultCommand dont Let these people get mad at you as it was my fault the fight started

P.S.S.S.
Wolverfrog your right how I sould take school more seriously.

P.S.S.S.S.
Me wtf are you doing you have a log to wright

P.S.S.S.S.S.
AssaultCommand Please take that hurtful comment off my thread please as it takes away from the creative juices and re place it
with any thing thats not to mean.


I know thats a lot of P.S. but I would hate to spam

  • 10.15.2010 3:44 PM PDT

POMC S117 Owns owns

Chapter 4 will be out on Saturday or Sunday if your intrested.

  • 10.15.2010 3:47 PM PDT


Posted by: POMC S117 Owns
Chapter 4 will be out on Saturday or Sunday if your interested?

interested you ask?
Great scot yes

  • 10.15.2010 3:55 PM PDT

POMC S117 Owns owns

Or I could write it right now if you beg.

  • 10.15.2010 3:58 PM PDT


Posted by: POMC S117 Owns
Or I could write it right now if you beg.

I dont beg dude sorry. And as stated a few times already it takes time to make a story


also Check my previous message

it has a question for you

  • 10.15.2010 4:03 PM PDT

POMC S117 Owns owns

Yeah I think he would so I'll use him when they reach Utgard.

  • 10.15.2010 4:05 PM PDT

sounds good

and wait what
were did AssaultCommand run off to
I wanted to talk more to him as we have just started a friend ship.

  • 10.15.2010 4:18 PM PDT

What a waste....


Posted by: POMC S117 Owns
Also were does it say that Falcons were restricted to Marines.
The Falcon is an Army vehicle. That's why the army troops and Noble use it in Reach, because they're part of the Army.

  • 10.15.2010 4:20 PM PDT
Subject: [Novel] The Conflict of Harvest-Chapter 3 complete

POMC S117 Owns owns

Did I say that the squad was in the Army? No. Did I say they were Marines? No. Oooh I hit the 50 post mark yay!

[Edited on 10.15.2010 4:26 PM PDT]

  • 10.15.2010 4:25 PM PDT


Posted by: POMC S117 Owns
Did I say that the squad was in the Army? No. Did I say they were Marines? No. Oooh I hit the 50 post mark yay!

blarg

[Edited on 10.15.2010 5:00 PM PDT]

  • 10.15.2010 4:43 PM PDT

POMC S117 Owns owns

-blam!-. Quick edit your post while I say they were in the chickens.

[Edited on 10.16.2010 3:50 AM PDT]

  • 10.15.2010 4:50 PM PDT

What a waste....


Posted by: POMC S117 Owns
-blam!-. Quick edit your post while I say they were in the Army.
Why? No one really reads far back into these threads anyways, lol. And you should just make it a Pelican, cuz The Army is the defensive force, not the offensive lol

  • 10.15.2010 4:57 PM PDT

Im sorry I did'nt mean for that to happen

Ill edit it now

  • 10.15.2010 4:59 PM PDT

just asking but is it possible what ever person I choose can you let live. I would hate for the story line to turn into scrambled eggs.

  • 10.15.2010 6:10 PM PDT


Posted by: AssaultCommand

Posted by: POMC S117 Owns
Whoever said your not even an amateur is the stupidest person ever, you are one of the most amazing writers i've seen.
>.<

He said he's not even an amateur himself, so technically, POMC, you just called Wolvers the stupidest person ever...

oh snap

  • 10.16.2010 2:42 AM PDT

POMC S117 Owns owns


Posted by: Axe11154
just asking but is it possible what ever person I choose can you let live. I would hate for the story line to turn into scrambled eggs.


Yeah, they will live.

  • 10.16.2010 3:51 AM PDT

POMC S117 Owns owns

Posted by: AssaultCommand

Posted by: POMC S117 Owns
Whoever said your not even an amateur is the stupidest person ever, you are one of the most amazing writers i've seen.
>.<

He said he's not even an amateur himself, so technically, POMC, you just called Wolvers the stupidest person ever...


-blam!-holycrapadacushoneybaconchickenandeggs! Do you think he knows what I was meaning to say. Anyways Chapter 4 will be out in 30mins round about.


[Edited on 10.16.2010 3:54 AM PDT]

  • 10.16.2010 3:53 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] The Conflict of Harvest-Chapter 4 complete

POMC S117 Owns owns

Chapter 4-How to kill a Behemoth

Sgt. Johnson rolled over and faced his assailant. He loaded his M19 SSM and fired. The fast-moving projectile was followed by a trail of white smoke and then exploded. The Scarab wasn't damaged at all.

*

Malarek sped along the streets at a fast pace. He went past 2 fleeing Brutes. He was going to pursue them, but he had an insect to catch.

When he arrived at the car park he saw cars crushed into the ground and chunks of road shifted by a few metres. The culprit was the Scarab. He watched as it took its leg down on a red, rusty Traxus Industries truck. There was a small explosion.

Unexpectedly, the Scarab began to bend its joints until its undercarrige was touching the cracked, war-torn paving. Then, without even knowing what he was doing, Malarek vaulted off the Ghost and onto a car.

He leaped from vehicle to vehicle and landed athletically on top of the Scarab. He quickly engaged the crew.

A Brute wearing cerimonial, bright yellow armour grunted incoherently and charged angrily at Malarek. He squatted onto the outer armour of the Scarab and the Brute sprinted off the edge. Then a Grunt Major came out from behind cover with a Fuel Rod Cannon. It was about to fire. Malarek had no time to dodge it or hide.

BANG! The Grunt fell with the gun and lay there. Malarek looked around for his champion and saw a coloured Marine Sergeant drop from a window ledge and onto the giant beasts hull.

"Any idea on how to kill this thing?" He querried in a heavily accented voice.

"No, sorry."Replied Malarek taking his black M247 General Purpose Machine Gun out.

Then the Grunt behind them coughed loudly. Malarek jumped in surprise. He then grinned at Johnson. Johnson replied with a laugh. They marched over to the dying grunt.

"No, humans don't kill me!" It squeled as the Scarab began to rise."I'll tell you everything I know!"

The Scarab began to search around for them stupidly.

"Tell us how to blow this thing up." Said Johnson lighting a Sweet Williams Cigar.

"Emmm....You shoot the red glowing thing at the back." It squaked loudly.

Johnson blew some acrid smelling smoke into the tiny creatures face. Malarek picked up the Grunt and hopped off the Scarab and landed lightly on his feet.

Johnson procceded to blow up the monster. He took his rocket launcher with him and walked to the back. He stared at the red shield and fired at it. It blew up the back and a klaxon went off.

"That doesn't look good." He said and leapfrogged off of the doomed vehicle.

He stood up, dropped his weapon and ran.

*

Rolek lifted himself up slowly and looked around. It was night time. Banshees patrolled the sky. Each one was fitted with a searchbeam. The piercing, bright, white light cut into the darkness. Rolek hit the floor as the light went over his position. The Banshee hovered for a while as if looking for something then moved away. Rolek got up and found his way out of the once vibrant town and towards Utgard.

[Edited on 10.16.2010 5:42 AM PDT]

  • 10.16.2010 5:37 AM PDT

POMC S117 Owns owns

What if they were Marines that were there when the Covvies attacked. Then they could use a Falcon.

[Edited on 10.16.2010 5:42 AM PDT]

  • 10.16.2010 5:38 AM PDT

utgard yay I get to see Gregory

Indeed This will be a good chance for my popcorn to be eaten.

  • 10.16.2010 6:37 AM PDT


Posted by: POMC S117 Owns
What if they were Marines that were there when the Covvies attacked. Then they could use a Falcon.


more or less I guess

but Is that argument still going on

I thought you already settled this days ago

  • 10.16.2010 6:38 AM PDT

POMC S117 Owns owns

Alas my friends, I guess it was not.

  • 10.16.2010 6:43 AM PDT


Posted by: POMC S117 Owns
Alas my friends, I guess it was not.


cant we just say the falcon had stealth capability or something. To make it were it wouldn't be obvious it would be there. I mean if you can do it for a spartan whos suit uses nuclear power you can do it for a simple vehicle right.

thats what Im doing in mine
(It says it in log 4 I do believe)

[Edited on 10.16.2010 6:50 AM PDT]

  • 10.16.2010 6:50 AM PDT