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Posted by: Axe11154
Posted by: steadman
Posted by: AssaultCommand
Steamitor? lol.
Steaditor? maybe.
I'll try for the first few chapters you release.
There can only be one Steamitor/ Steaditor, and that is the Steadman.
Reading now, I will post feedback tomorrow.
tomorrow?
But his story only takes a simple 10 minutes to read
oh wait your one of those reviewer guys who wright pages of pages of 1 review of a story
Iv always wondered thou do you guys get payed for it
Because I think it be a fun job.
Also if you aren't you seem to be.
I am unpaid and unemployed, and yes, I have noticed about three things in the first sentence which could be changed for more dramatic emphasis. Really, I do not think that I could condense all the changes into one bungie.net post, with justification for all the changes.
If the writer wants my help, then he can PM me and ask for it, at which time I will start the inevitable message fight.