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  • Subject: [Novel] The Conflict of Harvest-Chapter 4 complete

POMC S117 Owns owns

Ok, thanks chapter 5 tommorrow.

  • 10.22.2010 3:17 PM PDT

its tomorrow

wheres the story lmao

sorry I cant wait

  • 10.23.2010 3:25 AM PDT

POMC S117 Owns owns

Right, here it is.

  • 10.23.2010 7:10 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] The Conflict of Harvest-Chapter 5 complete

POMC S117 Owns owns

Chapter 5- Just because you have armour doesn't make you a Spartan

Rolek limped up a small, sandy hill and stared at the distant city, large rounds of Plasma fire illuminated it and huge, menacing Corvette hovered over the city's space elevator, sending barrage after barrage of plasma torpeados onto the ravaged roads, creating gargantuan explosions that broke the eerie, dark night.

Suddenly, his foot hit a small, hidden rock and he tumbled. He rolled over and fell down the hill. He cried out as he felt his foot brake. Slowly, he tried to stand. His head spun volientely and a bout of excruciating, jarring pain shot up his left leg. He almost fainted. He coughed noisily and croaked for help as another wave of nausea passed over him.

Then a Phantom, guarded by a pink Covenant air vehicle called a Vampire, flew over head. It's small but bright yellow searchlight swivelled around. Rolek watched as it hung stationary above a cave and began to descend.

"Mmmmmm...." He thought,"That must be going somewhere."

He waited for the Vampire to go away before crawling towards the opening of the dark, damp cave.

*

Malarek's Pelican drifted above the carcass of the metal Falcon.

"Sir, someone's over here!" Yelled an Army Private, scanning a pile of rubble with a Thermal Scanner.

Malarek rushed over to the Private and hauled the bricks off of the floor. He tossed them out the wall(That was made of glass.) Lying there was the lifeless body of Fringlek. Malarek dived to the ground and felt desparately for a pulse. Lub! Dub! Lub! Dub! It was there, but faint. Scarily, faint.

"Medic!" Shouted Malarek, lifting Fringlek off of the dusty floor.

A medic jumped from the Pelican and jogged over to Fringlek. He took a small green bottle of Biofoam from his belt and adminisdered it to Fringlek's bleeding stomach.

"Lieutenant, we are running on bingo fuel. We gotta leave." Said the pilot.

Malarek thrust Fringlek into the Pelican and glanced around. Rolek was nowhere to be seen.

*

Rolek snaked his way his way through the grass and onto the yellow, sandstone rock of the cave. He grabbed onto the sloping sides of the cave and stood up. He followed a trail spilt plasma and journeyed deeper into the cavity. He turned on his handheld flashlight and limped foward. He was walking for 5 uneventful minutes until he came to a wide, unnaturally-lit cavern of the cave.

In it were 4 Phantoms being re-fitted and dozens of Banshees. Many big, complicated computers were in the middle figuring out hundreds of calculations and deciphering numerous dark-blue glyphs. However, what made Rolek curious, was the giant, green Spartan-II sitting in the middle of a Covenant jail cell which was being guarded by two high-ranking Elites.

*

A green Fuel Rod hit the wing of the Pelican and it lurched foward. Malarek pulled out his Grenade Launcher. He loaded it and held onto the roof. He fired. The projectile arced in the air and went right past the Banshee. Malarek groaned and fired again, this time he changed the mode of fire to manual.

It exploded a few inches beside the vehicle but released a small EMP.

"Good hit lieutenant, we are approaching Utgard now." Said Charlie-Echo 244

Malarek sat back down.

Then, unexpectedley, a humongous, shark-like, purple ship tore through a cloud and crashed right through a skyscraper. The top half of the building plummeted to the ground, producing a massive shockwave.

"Sir, I am detecting a radiation flare!" Charlie-Echo 244 informed Malarek anxiously.

"Gett us outta here! Now!" Ordered Malarek.

The front of the ship glowed brightly, and then it unleashed a terribley devastating laser beam.

The beam cut through roads and buildings with ease as the Pelican retreated further into the city.

*

Rolek looked around carefully and spotted a pile of unwanted, unguarded plasma containers. He crept over to them and picked one up. He turned around to face the Phantom, which was only 30 metres away and out of the shadows. He had an idea.




[Edited on 10.24.2010 10:16 AM PDT]

  • 10.23.2010 7:13 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] The Conflict of Harvest-Chapter 4 complete

were is it I cant find it

  • 10.23.2010 8:06 AM PDT

POMC S117 Owns owns

Look again.

  • 10.23.2010 8:16 AM PDT

snap

lol

Im doing forge right now so it will take a while for me to start reading

  • 10.23.2010 8:41 AM PDT

POMC S117 Owns owns

It's fine.

  • 10.23.2010 8:51 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] The Conflict of Harvest-Chapter 5 complete

bloody hells its beautiful but it seems un finished

Are you still working on it (like I am with my chapter 6) or are you done with this chapter and are working hard with the next

that reminds me

halve you read my chapter 5

its ok if you didn't its not that good. I tried doing it several times but it constantly glitched and deleted

so what you get is what you get lol



[Edited on 10.23.2010 9:10 AM PDT]

  • 10.23.2010 8:57 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] The Conflict of Harvest-Chapter 4 complete

POMC S117 Owns owns

Im gonna add Malareks journey to Utgard. It's a chase scene. And then how Rolek getsover to the cell.

  • 10.23.2010 9:03 AM PDT

nice

  • 10.23.2010 10:33 AM PDT

POMC S117 Owns owns

Yes i've read it. It's good.

  • 10.23.2010 3:29 PM PDT

ya think


thanks you know how to brighten a day



I cant wait to read the rest of yours

  • 10.23.2010 5:49 PM PDT

What a waste....

I suggest this:

When denoting different times, hit center, then put a couple *** in the middle there.


Also, the S-II program went public in the late 2530s. Not during Harvest.

  • 10.23.2010 8:02 PM PDT


Posted by: Nocbl2
I suggest this:

When denoting different times, hit center, then put a couple *** in the middle there.


Also, the S-II program went public in the late 2530s. Not during Harvest.


yes public

but the S-II were in fact on harvest and many marines knew this

it was only the civilians who did'nt know so ya


it also says this a few times in professor haslys journal (sorry if miss spelled)

  • 10.23.2010 8:07 PM PDT

What a waste....


Posted by: Axe11154

Posted by: Nocbl2
I suggest this:

When denoting different times, hit center, then put a couple *** in the middle there.


Also, the S-II program went public in the late 2530s. Not during Harvest.


yes public

but the S-II were in fact on harvest and many marines knew this

it was only the civilians who did'nt know so ya


it also says this a few times in professor haslys journal (sorry if miss spelled)
In the books, there were rumors leaking, so obviously SOMEONE would have a basic idea of what they were, but probably not what they were called.

  • 10.23.2010 8:13 PM PDT
Subject: [Novel] The Conflict of Harvest-Chapter 5 complete


Posted by: Nocbl2

Posted by: Axe11154

Posted by: Nocbl2
I suggest this:

When denoting different times, hit center, then put a couple *** in the middle there.


Also, the S-II program went public in the late 2530s. Not during Harvest.


yes public

but the S-II were in fact on harvest and many marines knew this

it was only the civilians who did'nt know so ya


it also says this a few times in professor haslys journal (sorry if miss spelled)
In the books, there were rumors leaking, so obviously SOMEONE would have a basic idea of what they were, but probably not what they were called.

or he could know what they were called

most likely a large amount of marines would know

[Edited on 10.24.2010 5:14 AM PDT]

  • 10.24.2010 5:13 AM PDT

POMC S117 Owns owns

The squad are a part of a spec ops group more secretive than the Spartan project(my idea) who know about Spartans.

[Edited on 10.24.2010 10:16 AM PDT]

  • 10.24.2010 10:01 AM PDT

POMC S117 Owns owns

The longer version of Chapter 5 is out. Is it good? And what do you think the idea might be?

  • 10.24.2010 10:13 AM PDT

It seems a little shorter then I thought it be but still good



as for the Idea

probably roll one out to distract the elites then go save the spartan and then once the elites have walked to the plasma container he would blow it up. Then escape in the phantom.


or just load one or 2 of them into the phantom and blow the elites up

ether Idea I think would fit.

  • 10.24.2010 10:52 AM PDT

What a waste....

You might want to mention their "spec-ops" status in ONI. Since they're Army, maybe you could involve Colonel Ackerson?


Also, POMC, can you throw some of your followers at my story?

[Edited on 10.24.2010 11:47 AM PDT]

  • 10.24.2010 11:37 AM PDT

Not sure if he says yes to his but Ill gladly throw in 1 or 2 of mine from bluedwarf


chaining story's together makes them more sight able and gives the reader a faster set of story books
Posted by: Nocbl2
You might want to mention their "spec-ops" status in ONI. Since they're Army, maybe you could involve Colonel Ackerson?


Also, POMC, can you throw some of your followers at my story?

  • 10.24.2010 2:28 PM PDT

* POMC S117 Owns


do you by any chance have a list of all the main characters.

I just need a number not there names

(the real question is how many main characters are in the story now)

  • 10.25.2010 6:25 PM PDT

POMC S117 Owns owns

well there is quite alot of charecters that aren't in it at the moment, but there is about 10.

Rolek and the squad.
The Spartan that is from the Blue Dwarf.
Keyes.
An ONI operitive.

You can use a character from this story as longas it fits in with the time line, so ask me first.

Chpt. 6 will be out this week.
Rolek loads the Phantoms with containers and the Spartan and him run.

  • 10.27.2010 8:12 AM PDT