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Posted by: Mr Evil 37
Posted by: Wolverfrog
Posted by: Olole


You just described Halo: Revolutions.


I was just about to say this.


I wouldn't say that lol. As I haven't seen ether of my 2 in it lol.

  • 10.24.2010 11:03 AM PDT


Posted by: AssaultCommand

Posted by: POMC S117 Owns
Assualt Command done that for Wolver's fan-fic. It was amazing. And you mentioned my book. Are you serious, it isn't that good enough to permit a front cover as good as the one Assualt Command made.
If you finish your current story, I hope your writing skills will be of an adequate magnitude to produce a fan-fic of adequate quality. If that's the case, I'll make a PDF book for your new book.

You need to work on spelling (spellchecker), grammar and just on a believable plot. For example, in The Munchies' stories on those spartan 4s, when Dante goes to visit his old family, that's not a good part of the plot. Also, in Axe's story, the guy who gets spartan armor without being a spartan, that's just outright absurd. NOBODY could ever be as strong as a spartan without having had the genetic enhancements. Also, the Mjolnir suit basically acts out your movements as soon as you even think about it, and because it has such a fast reaction time, it breaks the bones of any non-spartan using it. It says so in the books. Sorry.


That's why in my newer story im trying to make it more believable.

and hes not using your typical Mjolnir armor as most of its systems are turned off (I will get to mentioning this in the future dont worry)

and I find the going to his old family a nice add on

makes him seem less like a robot
but sadly seems like a rip off of legends

  • 10.24.2010 2:17 PM PDT

god why does Halloween taunt me so.

  • 10.25.2010 3:38 AM PDT

POMC S117 Owns owns

Thank you.

  • 10.27.2010 8:30 AM PDT

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