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Subject: Fight the Infection - Story of the Infection Playlist

I'm trying to learn simple ways of video editing. While a montage would have been a good way to go about doing that, I really wanted to try my hand at a little story with this video. So I based this story on my favorite playlist, Infection.

View: Fight the Infection on Youtube.com

Any(good or bad) feedback would be very helpful and much appreciated.

Thanks for Reading ~ NANOjam

  • 10.25.2010 5:55 AM PDT

I don't really see it as a story, just a load of clips put together. If it were all on one map it would be more story like in my opinion. And when he/she died it wasn't really a story anymore. Because if it was a story, they'd be dead, if you get what I mean. If they died at the end, it would be much better. Also at the end when the zombie jumped down, it would have been better to have a bang or something. You didn't have any credits or titles or stuff, so I'd recommend putting them in. Also, don't forget to put the bit about Microsoft's Game Content Usage Rules. The camera shots were good except for the first one, it just looked a bit sloppy because of the way it was. you should have done ones like the second camera shot looking at scenery. Always do scenery first, then action etc.

It was good though, nice quality, music, clips. Well done.

P.S. I do expect you to go watch my video about cool and funny screenshots. :P

  • 10.25.2010 6:24 AM PDT