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Subject: [Story] Sierra 117 and [story] UNSC Outpost

The Master Chief and the disgraced Zealot commander of the former fleet of Particular Justice, now known as the arbiter, walked through the dense jungle of Africa with a group of weary marines lead by Sergeant Major Avery Johnson.It is imperative that Sierra 117 gets back to Crows Nest in one piece.
"Shhhh, quiet Covenant dropship overhead."Private Gibbs whispered quietly.
Everybody got down to prone exept the Arbiter who, of course, turned his cloaking invisibility on. The elite seemed to evaporate in midair.
As soon as the dropship passed by the marines jumped up and sprinted to a rotted log. An ugly gorilla-like beast sat on a rock, it was a brute. The brute sniffed the air and took out a spike rifle, sensing the marines presence. The Master Chief took out a long, sharp, military knife that glistened in the bright sunlight.
"take him out silently"
"Damnit Gibbs it don't matter, we're dead man!" whined private Garcia.
"Stow it soldier, the chief knows what he's doin" ordered Sergeant Johnson.
The brute looked around but saw nothing. Nothing but his own purple blood pour out of his own neck. He tried to yell but slumped to the ground dead. A grunt witnessed what happened and fired seven shots of his plasma pistol. only one skimmed the chief's armor. Grunts are terrible shots. John-117 rounded the corner of the rock aimed his BR55 rifle at the grunt. All three bullets hit the creature directly in the head.
"Ahhhh, im hit!" Private Garcia screamed as a plasma bolt hit him directly in the the leg.
"Stay in there Garcia!"
At the very moment the Master Chief looked behind him he was surrounded by five brutes. They Reloaded their spike rifles and aimed. The Master Chief slammed a bubble shield down to the ground. At least fifty spikes ricochet off the bubble and penetrated the brutes helmets and pierced their brains.
When the Chief looked back at the marines, Garcia had three spikes in his side and his leg melted off. The dropship came back around to drop a squad of grunts and a brute captain. With a well thrown grenade the Chief took out the five grunts, the Arbiter handled the brute with a carbine bolt right between the eyes. The next area was smooth sailing, since there was mostly grunts and jackals. They lost Gonzalez and Thompson from a plasma grenade and they were left with Gibbs and Rochev. Sergeant Johnson, Lopez, and ching got seperated from the rest.
At the point where the were supposed to be extracted was flooded with covenant units and the pelican crashed into a mountain.
"brutes, I hate brutes" said private Gibbs as he sprayed his MA5C into a brute's torso.
"Gaaahh! I can't pull it out!"
"Hang in there Rochev. Ahhhhhhh!!" Gibbs and Rochev both down? Looks like its up to the Master Chief and the Arbiter. As the two unlikely allies crossed through the brush and fauna jackals shot down from the treetops with needle rifles, carbines, and focus rifles. The Arbiter took out his energy sword and threw it, slicing a jackal in two pieces. The Spartan fired two shots from his M6G Magnum into another jackal's thin skull. It fired two dying shots, one hit a tree the other hit the last remaining jackal/skirmisher in the side.
John continued forth deeper into the jungle until he hit a cliff. Beyond the cliff was warehouses leading to an ancient refinery and an old generator and... There! A war chieftain and a battalion of brute special forces held sergeant Johnson, Mendez, Ching, and Lopez captive."I've got a bad feeling about this... Spartan.
"spoke the Arbiter reluctantly.
"I don't" said the Master Chief while blind firing a jackal sniper with his BR.
"heretic Arbiter!! you die now!" shouted a grunt in alien tongue while lobbing a plasma grenade at Thel Vadam. the grenade landed next to him he evaded but the splash damage of the plasma grenade lowered his shields down to zero charge. John 117 spun around the corner to give him cover fire while his shield recharged. When the Chief spun around he was hit in the visor by a brute chieftan's giant fist. The chieftan put his foot on the Spartan's stomach and pushed down. John could feel his shielding giving out.
Just when the personal shield unit gave out, he felt the ape foot release. The Arbiter was standing behind the war chieftan with his plasma sword in the monkey's chest. The chieftan flopped to the ground and the Arbiter sheathed his sword.
"We're even" the Arbiter spoke. The Chief nodded his head and Thel Vadam followed suit. The two crossed a bridge filled with covenant units to find the holding cells for Mendez, Johnson, Lopez, and Ching.
"This is charlie alpha india foxtrot of Crows Nest, we are inbound to your position with attack pelicans, over".
"We MUST secure a landing zone for the incoming pelicans. Lets try the bridge". said a marine "Phantoms!!".
"move marines, spread out and find cover!!" yelled Johnson. All of the sudden a blinding light flashed from out of nowhere... It was the phantoms, they exploded. The pelicans came flying down."The calvalry arrived!!". The rushing wind as the pelicans landed was tremendous.
"Good to have back chief let's get back to base 'cause I need some sleep!" cried Mendez.

[Edited on 11.13.2010 1:07 PM PST]

  • 11.12.2010 6:06 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] Sierra 117

If you guys like this then i'll write more later if not then i won't

  • 11.12.2010 9:28 PM PDT

Posted by: DeadeyePanda117
If you guys like this then i'll write more later if not then i won't


There's your problem right there.

  • 11.13.2010 4:38 AM PDT
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you need paragraphs makes it easier to read.

  • 11.13.2010 4:41 AM PDT

ok thanks

  • 11.13.2010 6:53 AM PDT

whats my problem?

  • 11.13.2010 6:58 AM PDT

What a waste....


Posted by: DeadeyePanda117
whats my problem?
Not having readers shouldn't mean you stop writing.

  • 11.13.2010 7:28 AM PDT

here is a hint of my next section

[Edited on 11.13.2010 12:21 PM PST]

  • 11.13.2010 7:32 AM PDT
Subject: [Story] Sierra 117 and [story] UNSC Outpost

As Private Kent walked through the dark corridor with his MA5k and two frag grenades, he felt as if he was being watched. His best friend since he joined the UNSC, Private Mitchell, was beside him, looking around, frightened.
"I dont know what happened to lieutenant Scott. He's just not responding" Whispered a scared Mitchell.
A loud creaking noise disturbed the scary silence. Both Mitch and Kent raised their weapons.
"uhhhg", a soft groan came from inside the office.
"Whiskey", Yelled out Mitch. It was a code word for a marine that wanted to make sure the enviroment was clear of friendlies before he started shooting at friendlies instead of hostiles.
"Man- mango- goes"responded a voices that sounded half dead.
"that's the correct response, right Kent?"
"Yes, Whiskey mangoes,yes it it," answered Kent.
"D-don't come, gahhgck!" the light from an energy sword iluminated the black room. It stabbed at a marine... It was Lieutenant Scott! death by energy sword!!
"FIRE! FIRE!" shouted Kent. The roar of assault rifle fire filled the room.
"Damnit! out of ammo"
"Me too,"four more swords lit up, they were surrounded...

[Edited on 11.13.2010 1:03 PM PST]

  • 11.13.2010 12:58 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] Sierra 117

What a waste....

Try to use paragraphs. Also, when a new person is talking, start a new line.

"Blah?" Mr. Blah said.

"Blargh." Mrs. Blargh said, etc.

  • 11.13.2010 1:01 PM PDT

The Razor.

For the honour of the Mirratord.

Posted by: Wolverfrog
Posted by: DeadeyePanda117
If you guys like this then i'll write more later if not then i won't


There's your problem right there.

  • 11.13.2010 1:13 PM PDT

An assassin will always carry on, even after death.

In my previous story, it got only around 60 replies in the five or so months I was writing it. Just because no-one reads your story dosn't mean you should stop writting.

  • 11.13.2010 4:12 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] Sierra 117 and [story] UNSC Outpost

Hey and I read your story its very good. Isn't that the one that they are trying to find the master chief with ... James?


[Edited on 11.13.2010 7:33 PM PST]

  • 11.13.2010 7:32 PM PDT

An assassin will always carry on, even after death.

That is my new story. My previous story has many of the same characters but it is based in New Mombassa

  • 11.14.2010 11:24 AM PDT