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  • 11.17.2010 6:45 PM PDT

How'd you find me?

Pretty cool, you might want to darken up your lines a bit and work slightly on proportion, but still, very good.

  • 11.17.2010 8:12 PM PDT

...every start's got it's ending even when we've learned to rise above it all...

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Don't forget to smooth out your lines. If it helps, I start off using basic geometric shapes to help proportion limbs and the body to a character's head.

You're pretty good. Keep practicing and use lots of references with what you draw. =)

Feel free to add me on DeviantArt

  • 11.17.2010 10:05 PM PDT

@JosephBiwald
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Per Audacia Ad Astra

Overall the images look pretty cool, but I see a few improvements. First of all your first image of George needs to be properly scaled (Meaning make all of hid body parts the correct and appropriate size). Also you need to smooth out Emile's head.

  • 11.18.2010 3:08 PM PDT

Soffish for everyone!

Art and Halo = my life... pretty much.

i like the chibiesc style youve got going, the lines could use some sharpening and the basic shapes can be smoothed out with better value BUT not too shabby :D

  • 11.18.2010 8:53 PM PDT

My dream is to work for bungie, as a concept artist.

I give this gallery a 10/10, for being awesome! :D

  • 12.02.2010 1:35 PM PDT