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Subject: (Story) Halo: The Lost Chapters
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Chapter 1: Noble Six Tower High: Part 1

Noble Six, was sent on towers with a sniper rifle and Dmr, by Noble Team, they had 3 members, they did not have in 2552.

The year is 2546, and elites are after him, he snipes a couple in the face, then he's running across a rooftop, he see's a bomb with 10 secs on the time, he sprints and jumps to another tower, it was a high jump, the bomb explosion barely hit him, and he fell on the tower, obviousily his shields our down, and he barely survived.

He made it inside the tower, and the elite squad did not make, but unfourtanetly, the phantom dropped off the rest of the elites, and some banshees came from nowhere, and the phantom took off.

Noble Six, see's an elite inside the tower with his back turned, he throws his knife at the back of the elite's neck, and quickly pulls it out,
then he see's 2 elite's come in the tower.

Noble Six tossed a grenade, and it took the elite's shields down, and elite's were stunned, and Noble 6, sniped them as they were stunned.

Noble 6, continues to run, and finds a group of dead marines, and ODSTs, and one dead spartan from the Noble Team, named Joey.

Noble Six, continued to run, and there was a big crack in the glass and a destroyed falcon, plus a hurt hornet, next to it, Noble Six, get's in the hornet, then all of a sudden a banshee starts attacking him, 10 feet below.

Noble Six jumps out the hornet, and opens the banshee's hatch, and slices the elite's neck and throws him outta the banshee and starts to pilot the banshee.

TO BE CONTINUED.....

[Edited on 01.11.2011 6:15 PM PST]

  • 11.19.2010 8:04 PM PDT
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Chapter 2: Noble Six Hidden Mission 1: Tower High: Part 2
Banshees are coming from nowhere, he shoots one down, and Noble Six starts to dodge to left, shoot a banshee bomb at another banshee, the other banshee goes down, Noble Six is fleeing to the top of the rooftops to kill the elites he was supposed to kill, and he shot a banshee bomb at the squad, one survived, and was getting up slowly, panting, then he got shot down by Noble Six, then Noble Six tells Noble Team that he took at a banshee and a Noble Team Member did not make it, his name was Joey, and he asked what should he do with the banshees, and Noble Team said Do Nothing, there's another spartan taking care of it, come back to Noble Base. Noble Six went back, and Carter said good job for doing this mission. Noble Six said, it's an honor, one.

[Edited on 11.20.2010 8:11 AM PST]

  • 11.20.2010 8:08 AM PDT

What a waste....

What? I don't even...

  • 11.20.2010 8:20 AM PDT
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Chapter 3: Noble Six Tower High Mission: Part 3: Finale
The spartan jumped on to a banshee, and boarded it, and his spartan number was 117 and name was John, sounds familar huh, he was shooting down some banshees with his banshee, then all of a sudden a phantom starts chasing him, he starts fleeing and then he did a back dodge, and jumped out of the banshee, and landed on the phantom, and found out how to get inside, he got inside with a couple plasmas and frags, and a Energy Sword, plus a plasma pistol, and they were just blue elites and orange grunts and the driver was a gold elite, and cortana said, bet you can't stick it. John said your on.
John just basically, slice an elite's neck that was paying attention, then elite charged him, he slices his leg, an elite tried sneaking behind him, then John, quickly turns and impales his neck, and quicky turns again, and quickly impales the elite that's on the ground, and then he grabbed a grunt by the neck, and the other grunt was screaming, and he threw the grunt at the other grunt, the John assassinated the pilot.
Noble Six's mission was now complete

TO BE CONTINUED.....

[Edited on 11.20.2010 8:22 AM PST]

  • 11.20.2010 8:20 AM PDT
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Chapter 4: Covenant Battle: Part 1: The Fight

The year is 2612,
Yes the covenant, actually survived, sad huh.
The covenant lost to the filthy humans, again, but then the covenant got really mad, and they are like if it was not for you, this would happen and stuff like that they got mad, and half the covenant had turned into rebels, it was half of the covies vs half the covies, sad huh, think again, that means they won't fight the humans, or will they,
well anyway, the other half were building a base, then all of a sudden, a drop ship they never seen before comes, it's some kind of new alien species, well anyway they crashlanded, and then a grunt asks. "What is wrong, alien?" The alien answers back "Your an alien! permission to fire, captain?", "Permission Granted." the alien shoots the grunt in the head, Master Chief comes from nowhere, and the alien escapes, and Master Chief did not know he was in covenant territory, so the covies, started to attack, Master Chief had a Target Locator, but he was so close to the squad, so he was fleeing, then he found a pelican, and started bombing some covies, and then fleed away

  • 11.20.2010 8:37 AM PDT

What?

How did the UNSC find Masterchief? What am I even reading?

  • 11.20.2010 11:47 AM PDT

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It's good but it doesn't fit with the canon.

  • 11.20.2010 11:55 AM PDT
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Posted by: SHOCKER1000
It's good but it doesn't fit with the canon.


This happened before the Battle of Reach in the game "HALO REACH", you do not know, that Noble 6 met chief or not, I'm not really trying to fit it in the canon, I just want to make an alternate "Halo" Story that's Interesting

  • 01.11.2011 5:55 PM PDT

About me: I am a vicious wolf of a man.

But really am sweet at heart. =)

This doesn't make any sense. You shifted from present to past tense far to much, there was little to no punctuation, and you didn't use paragraphs or capital letters. Heck, your "chapters" could all be condensed into one post and you still would have thousands of characters to work with.

1/10. You could have done much better.

  • 01.11.2011 6:06 PM PDT
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How is 6 years, too far

  • 01.11.2011 6:12 PM PDT

"I will show you how a true Prussian officer fights!"

"And i will show you where the iron crosses grow..."

- "Cross of Iron"

Theres no descriptions in this story. No character development or anything. Everything is rushed and just to action packed. This isn't a story its a comic book...(without the pictures)

[Edited on 01.11.2011 7:30 PM PST]

  • 01.11.2011 6:27 PM PDT

Games I like:,
Half-Minute Hero
MBU
Portal
Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
Maps I like: Turf, Avalanche, Pylon, Sandbox, Breakpoint and many more.

This story doesn't match anything in the halo cannon. The covenant were not on reach in 2046. Why was there a bomb with 10 seconds left right on the beggining ofthe story? You don't have a very good volcabulary, and I know your trying but I do not see a futre AT ALL with this story. Also, forgive my spelling I'm on iPod touch, keypad is small.

  • 01.11.2011 9:40 PM PDT

Games I like:,
Half-Minute Hero
MBU
Portal
Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
Maps I like: Turf, Avalanche, Pylon, Sandbox, Breakpoint and many more.

Also dude, you went backwards in years, not forwards. Yes i know your making an altenate halo, but the covenant did not find reach until 2552

  • 01.11.2011 10:02 PM PDT