- Armyman918
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Posted by: SS4 Paul
I think this machinima could go the distance if done well. Just some constructive criticism: I would dial back the Falcon vibration a tad. I get what you're trying to do there but it looked like they hit the worst turbulence I've ever seen. Also, I would try and make any other trailers you make a little more action packed. There was plenty going on around the main character but all he did was either sit in a Falcon or stand there with his feet glued to the ground. I know it'll be hard to do from a first person perspective, but anything is better than him just standing there.
If you ever need any help just send me a friend request. My gamertag is: o Comanche o. I've helped out with several machinimas before. Some never were released due to the laziness of the director and one was postponed until Reach. I'd love to help you see this through.
Yeah I didn't want the vibration that high on the opening falcon scene, I couldn't tell how high is was sense the scenes lag abit when I edit. I will most likely end up taking it out. I also wanted to add it to the last falcon scene but for some reason it didn't take. They main character will move around more thoughout the actual film, remember this is a trailer, besides the actual film will explain why he isn't exactly at the top of the hill with the tanks.