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Were supposed to write a poemsong and i dont know if this is good.

Put the cap back on please
we can't go farther
opaque sunlight advances are such a bother
Knots tied in the rope
don't worry were all fake......thats all i got.

  • 11.14.2005 6:59 PM PDT
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So fake rymes with opaque but what does rope ryme with.

  • 11.14.2005 7:04 PM PDT
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The pope

  • 11.14.2005 7:17 PM PDT
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Yeah after rope you should put I strangled the Pope.

I guess

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  • 11.14.2005 7:31 PM PDT

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Posted by: The Nirvana Zep
Were supposed to write a poemsong and i dont know if this is good.

Put the cap back on please
we can't go farther
opaque sunlight advances are such a bother
Knots tied in the rope
don't worry were all fake......thats all i got.

Its an ok one some of it doesnt rhyme like rope doesnt?

  • 11.14.2005 7:33 PM PDT
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LOL i HAD to do something like this but instead i rote a lymrick about my techers name who was Dean here it is I got suspended for this as well

There once was a man called Dean who invented the wanking machine 1 99 strokes the fu*^ing thing broke and wiped his balls in to cream

  • 11.14.2005 10:42 PM PDT
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Remember, poems don't need to rhyme. Try some half rhymes if you want.

If you've gone through high-school English, you'ld know about SPECS. You should try to use it on your own poem.

Subject - What is it about.
Purpose - Why has the author done what he/she has done, for what "purpose"?
Emotion - What's the mood? What was the author trying to achieve?
Craftsmanship:
-Style
-Language
-Imagry
-Mood
-Sound
Summery.

With "Craftsmanship", which I probably got a few of the SLIMS wrong, try to make sure you've filled in most of the areas, and focas on one stronger then the others.

Just.. do your best. We're not all poets, but we all have imagination.

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  • 11.14.2005 10:58 PM PDT
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Put the cap back on please
we can't go farther
opaque sunlight advances are such a bother
Knots tied in the rope
don't worry were all fake
I strangled the Pope. i just stole the idea from the guy above me

  • 11.15.2005 1:33 PM PDT
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and then i smoked dope

  • 11.15.2005 1:47 PM PDT