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Subject: Laser Wars: Shadows
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hey seraph, you should make a picture of kensai with her wings and all that.

  • 08.25.2004 1:55 PM PDT
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As Lillith walked down the coridors she was meet by the predators that helped to save her from her death, Lillith simply nods anodlegment. She is greeted by a military doctor and is taken inside a room. There is experimental research and devices...

  • 08.25.2004 1:56 PM PDT
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Posted by: Spartan 133 aka
hey seraph, you should make a picture of kensai with her wings and all that.

I may this took me 4 hours from 12:30am to 4:30 am but i will in time.

  • 08.25.2004 1:56 PM PDT
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Dave awoke and the sound of his ship's engines told him he was still in hyperspace. He went to the command deck and sat in his chair. He looked at the data on Lillith that he had been able to come up with. It was a small amount of data and he didnt get much out of it but he would learn once he found her

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The doctor spoke to her, "While we were healing your wounds we took a sample of your bone marrow. There were odd chemicals in them, which came only from a select group of drugs. We believe whatever you remember of your past may be false." Lillith stared back in shock, "can i find my memories?" She asked, "You can it will just require a brain scan. Please lay down on the table."

  • 08.25.2004 2:00 PM PDT
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She felt small nodes attach to her forehead. A great cylinder surrounded and started to spin. Lillith slipped into her mind....

  • 08.25.2004 2:02 PM PDT
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In her mind everthing became a blure she saw bits and pieces of her past. It all went dark. she was standing there looking up at a man he was very tall or was she very short. The man put her on his lap. This was her father. He spoke to her, "I am going to make sure, you grow up proper and happy." Lillith almost came out of the trance then. His voice was the voice on the message...

  • 08.25.2004 2:06 PM PDT
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Dave landed on the planet with Corran Horn(Corran is 2nd in command of rogue squadron) they procede twoards the hospital quickly and walked up to the secretary of the military branch. "Hello." the woman said. "We're here to see Lillith" Dave said. "Lilith is with the doctor right now please wait." The woman smiled and pointed at a bench. Dave walked over and sat down with Corran. " What is it Corran?" Dave said seeing Corran's odd look. " Dave. Over there are some Predators. I can see them cause im used to your old predator guards and my small jedi abilities can see them." Dave looked and saw the Predators. "Well we'll just stay clear" said Dave. "That'll be hard" said Corran "Those Preds are here t see Lillith." Dave felt his face show some trouble, but hid it. Dave knew that if the Preds weren't satisfied with things near Lillith they would take her. Dave got up and barged throught the doors to the area Lillith was in. A passing doctor tried to sto[p him but Dave pushed him aside. He had to get to this Lillith.

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The man lead her to a swing, she remembered playing hours on it. As she swung, her father entered the house. She could see her mother her hair tied into a tight bun, her face dirty from working in the garden. Lillith watch as they spoke, she could not hear the words. But then Lillith saw her father strike her. Lillith hid under the swing-set and closed her eyes. She did this each time it happened... (what you think of the pic, I like some creative critisim)

[Edited on 8/25/2004 2:14:00 PM]

  • 08.25.2004 2:13 PM PDT
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The Medics that hd saved Lillith's life and the Marines that had chased and killed the peopel in the black van demanded to be let into the scanning room. The receptionist told them to sit down next to the guy with some soldiers, some predators, and a guy with influenza.

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the predators saw the man approaching lillith. they quickly ran to to the room and started to protect lillith.

  • 08.25.2004 2:17 PM PDT
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Posted by: Fallen Seraph
The man lead her to a swing, she remembered playing hours on it. As she swung, her father entered the house. She could see her mother her hair tied into a tight bun, her face dirty from working in the garden. Lillith watch as they spoke, she could not hear the words. But then Lillith saw her father strike her. Lillith hid under the swing-set and closed her eyes. She did this each time it happened... (what you think of the pic, I like some creative critisim)


the Lillith pic? good.

on with the story.

Dave pushed into Lillith's room and saw her under a brain reenergizer. The doctor looked up. "Who are you?" Dave looked at the man. Knowing that this planet knew of Seraph's original destruction he smiled. " I'm Dave Ender and I'm here to see Miss Lillith." The doctor fumbeled backwards and then ran out of the room terrified that Dave would slice him. "Know i just have to wait for her to be done and hope the Preds wait before coming in." he took a seat next to lillith and watched her twitch about.

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Lillith saw in seconds, years go past. Each day blood stains could be seen on her mother clothing. Lillith hid these and continued to live on. Her nights were spent keeping her father from killing them in his drunken state...

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Dave notcied Lillith start to cry in the sleep she was in. He looked up to see a Predator above him with his blades drawn. Dave said " I will not hurt her i just need to talk to her."

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One day stood clear in her memories. She saw a alien enter there small house. He was tall with a jackal like face and hooved feet. He spent hours speaking with her father... What were they taking about. When he left her father was in a mad rage. He smashed plates and dishes... Till he fell asleep on the sofa... She saw on the table a gun...

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The squad saw the angry guy with soldiers barge through the double doors, knocking over nurses and doctors. THE PREDATORS FOLlowed him , and then the Marines ran with them towards the scanning bay.


Meanwhile....


Over in the park, theb Marines had just finished cutting though the cockpit dome. They shone a light into the ship, calling out into the darkness. "I dont know" one of the Marines sighed,"we could go in, bt it might be seen by whoever is inside as a hostile act, or we wait out here, and it is seen as a trap."

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the predators let dave talk to lillith, but their blades remained drawn

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Two more weeks pass. She was playing outside on the swing. She heard a gunshot from inside. Lillith ran into her pink bedroom. Her mother was on her bed, the bed was soaked red with blood, gore and blood covered the walls. Lillith held her head in her arms, blood rolled onto them from the gaping hole in her mothers head. Then all was dark. She smelt bio-fluids and the bitter smell of medicine...

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So it wS in the scanning room, with Dave ENder and his buddies, 5 Predators, and 10 mARINES AND mEDICS.

  • 08.25.2004 2:25 PM PDT
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Dave saw Lillith start to twitch violently and reached to take of the brain reenigizer but the Preds stopped him and gave him a look to let her go until she awoke.

  • 08.25.2004 2:27 PM PDT
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The Marines are glaring at the Predators. The Predators are glaring at Dave. Dave is glaring at Lillith. Lillith isnt glaring.

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Posted by: Shade the 2nd
The Marines are glaring at the Predators. The Predators are glaring at Dave. Dave is glaring at Lillith. Lillith isnt glaring.


lol

  • 08.25.2004 2:28 PM PDT
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In Lilliths mind she felt the prick of needles acorss her body and the ache of exercises. Her new masters watched her. She was working for the Company. Lillith remebers walking through the area with the tanks. She saw a young woman in one except one arm was all metal. Her face was that of Kensai's. Lillith saw the bounty hunter. "How are you doing ym daughter." Lillith woke with a start. She hit her head hard on the scanner and rolled of the bed. Tears rolled down her cheeks. She slammed her fist into the floor, "DAMN HIM" She yelled...

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Dave saw her wake up and fall off the bed and reached down to help her.

  • 08.25.2004 2:30 PM PDT
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the predators withdrew their blades and helped lillith up

  • 08.25.2004 2:31 PM PDT