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Okay lets see Lillith remembered what happened in her past. The bounty hunter was her fahter so she goes to get revenge. Her father dies by the hand(literally) of Kensai(but she is different), Lillith and Kensai now are on the run i gues you can say. Kensai is taking about the spheres of power from the last laser war.

  • 08.25.2004 7:18 PM PDT
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Ok cool i might make a good plot point while your doing that.

  • 08.25.2004 7:20 PM PDT
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"What are we doing here, Kensai?" Lillith asked she still believed this was the real Kensai. "We are hear to give you power." Kensai says in a smug way. She walks up to one orb it turns to black smoke and curls around her body. Her wings fold out from her back. Lillith stepped back in shock. This was not the Kensai she knew...

  • 08.25.2004 7:23 PM PDT
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What the hell did she mean thoguht Lillith. She stumbled on the wet stone. She fell but continued to crawl away from her... Kensai pulled a flechette gun from its holster. "Please don't make me do this, Lillith" She aimed it at Lillith's leg...

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  • 08.25.2004 7:32 PM PDT
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Blake landed in the snow near the mountain until the roar of the fighter's engines came to a stop. He exited the ship into an intense cold. It started badly snowing, and there was a fog that caused him only to be able to see about 50 feet in front of him. He could see some boot prints leading up a path on the mountain into a cave...

  • 08.25.2004 7:38 PM PDT
Subject: Laser War: Shadow
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"Who are you really. I am no longer tricked by you. You can't be Kensai." Lillith got up and turned to run. She heard a click of a dart being fired. Pain went up her leg. She feel in a puddle of her own blood. Her leg had been blasted open she saw the bone. "Why" She says trhough tears and clenched teeth. "Why for power my dear." Says Kensai as she dragged her towards the pedastal...

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Lillith began to lose consciousness as blood seeped out. She could feel her body moving along the floor but could not understand how. She was finally greeted by a coma...

  • 08.25.2004 7:45 PM PDT
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Blake wondered whether to pursue them to see what was going on, or to leave like Lillith said. He sighed, and decided to leave."She wouldn't have forced me to leave if she didn't know what the situation was. I guess something is happening of which I shouldn't intervene," Blake assured himself, heading back to his longsword fighter...

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  • 08.25.2004 7:46 PM PDT
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Kensai picked the now unconsciouss Lillith up in her arms. She lifted her towards a the pedastal and laid her on it. The orb shifted into black smoke and reppeared on Lilliths chest. Kensai smiled...

  • 08.25.2004 7:48 PM PDT
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what has happened since i left?

  • 08.25.2004 8:04 PM PDT
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nevermind, i just read the last pages. (btw) as kensai did her buisness (not that buisness), the predators walked upt to her. this was the kensai that they knew, but something was different. either way, they wanted to help her

  • 08.25.2004 8:17 PM PDT
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Blake noticed some strange ships fly next to the cave, a few of those armoured aliens exit the ships and enter the cave. He didn't know if they were friendly, but they looked fierce. They advanced into the cave with blades drawn. He didn't take any chances and he pursued them from a safe distance behind, his SMG ready(Blake doesn't know that the predators are allies yet).

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the predators saw blake and thought he was a thread to kensai.
they quickly cloaked themselves and grabbed blake by the neck.

  • 08.25.2004 8:42 PM PDT
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i gtg i will be on tommorow.

  • 08.25.2004 8:46 PM PDT
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alright...what time???

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Blake saw the predators spot him and they immediatly disappeared. He peered around the cave but was grabbed by the neck and held in the air. He thought these aliens were a definite threat to him, Lillith and Kensai. He lifted his SMG and emptied an entire clip into the unseen alien's body, causing it to drop him. He then unsheathed a knife...

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As i walk down the Royal courtyard i feel a ice cold wind at my back but thingk nothing of it.I look at the 3rd moon of Hivez and i feel the cold again.I look back and see to my horror a crecher black as midnight eminateng pure evil.I pull out my sword and say"I dont know how you got in but i will not alow you to leav alive" with that i thrust the sword into its chest.The sword has no effect and the entity graps my arm and starts sinking into my bodie.I fell the cold darkness fill my bodie as the entity takes my bodie.My spirit is traped powerless to stop what my bodie does.The entity poseses the bodie its hair fades to white the eyes become black as coal and cold surrounds him.

  • 08.25.2004 9:42 PM PDT
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uh-oh

  • 08.25.2004 9:45 PM PDT
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I would of posted it earlier but my internet was M.I.A.

  • 08.25.2004 9:54 PM PDT
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The fourums are screwing up.

[Edited on 8/25/2004 10:08:31 PM]

  • 08.25.2004 10:06 PM PDT
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what is up with the forums anyway

  • 08.25.2004 10:18 PM PDT
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Dont know.What did you think of my plot twist.

  • 08.25.2004 10:27 PM PDT
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(About an hour before Blake gets in a tussle with the Predators)

The Shadetacular was surrounded by dozens of ships, the two halves of the the fleet brought together. The fleet moved towards the planet in front of them, the tracking signal on Lillith showing clearly. Shade (Admiral) was very, very worried. He remembered the power of the Orbs, and if the energy field was to be believed, then this planet had one or more of them.

Shade was, for the first time in his life, scared shltless. He was driving his fleet into unknown territory, with the most powerful force in the universe waitng down there. Plus that force was evil, last time he checked. He had left a marine squad back on the industry planet to keep an eye on the crashed ship, but he had the remaining 49 squads with him now.

  • 08.26.2004 12:59 AM PDT
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To anyone who considers this relevant:

My AP class is ending tomorrow, so I may begin to be involved for a few days before my family takes a half-week breather starting Sunday. Anyway, any form of a plot summary in the meantime would be appreciated. Take care everyone, and have fun. I shall be watching.

  • 08.26.2004 1:01 AM PDT
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I understand...

  • 08.26.2004 1:24 AM PDT