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Posted by: ajw34307
Posted by: Wolverfrog
Amazing. I'm glancing through it now and it looks fantastic. There's only one weak link I can see, a story with some idiosyncratic Latin name.
Other than that, excellent.
;)
You're right, I should have called it something like Inserection and brought back Johnson, killed Mendez and John then brought them back, then devised a villain who gets captured and escapes about a thousand times over to leave the story open to a sequel which (god-forbid) will never happen and all that what-not.
Or maybe I should have given it a really camp name like Phoenix's Penance, or whatever you called it? Nah, how about a Latin title which relates to the story of what I wrote instead of forcing an irrelevant Phoenix Wright reference on the audience?
;)
In all sincerity though Alex, I read Absicondus, enjoyed it and I must say, congratulations:
You actually finished a (short) story.
:D
And if there is a volume two I'll contribute something. I expect that when I finally get around to reading Cryptum I'll be inspired by the Halo universe again.
[Edited on 01.08.2011 1:35 PM PST]