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Subject: Halo : Revolutions has Arrived

kelly clarkson.........

I enjoyed a great deal. keep it coming!!!!!
well done. only negative is that I wanted to read more of each story.....

  • 01.21.2011 1:34 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Posted by: KillJoy1217
I enjoyed a great deal. keep it coming!!!!!
well done. only negative is that I wanted to read more of each story.....


Did you have a favourite story... I hear Absconditus is very popular. :P

  • 01.21.2011 4:35 PM PDT

The Razor.

For the honour of the Mirratord.

I heard that Three Betrayals is better.

;)

  • 01.21.2011 5:33 PM PDT

I heard "Do No Harm" was the more popular choice.

  • 01.22.2011 2:26 AM PDT

The Razor.

For the honour of the Mirratord.

In all seriousness, I think we can all agree that "Miss Isabella" was fantastic. I think it as my favourite in the document.

  • 01.22.2011 5:54 AM PDT

Posted by: Dropship dude
No, acnboy. Spartain Ken 15 is a lesser being. Much like the bacteria that lives in your shi­t.
Posted by: mike120593
My shi­t bacteria takes offense to that comparison.

Don't make me lel. You won't like me when I lel.

Posted by: ajw34307
Posted by: KillJoy1217
I enjoyed a great deal. keep it coming!!!!!
well done. only negative is that I wanted to read more of each story.....


Did you have a favourite story... I hear Absconditus is very popular. :P
Pfft, I didn't have to change anything in that one. Obviously it can't be the best :D

  • 01.22.2011 6:24 AM PDT

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Posted by: Mr Evil 37
In all seriousness, I think we can all agree that "Miss Isabella" was fantastic. I think it as my favourite in the document.
That's the only one I read completely. The others just didn't appeal to me. The pics were cool all cool...

Honestly, it wasn't as good as I expected it to be. Short stories just aren't that good as long ones.

How about, for your next Volume, you take long stories, but just add chapters of them. Make it like a "to be continued" for the next volumes...

Overall, I'll give Volume I a 7/10

[Edited on 01.22.2011 10:09 AM PST]

  • 01.22.2011 10:08 AM PDT

@JosephBiwald
View my Art

Per Audacia Ad Astra

I'm hopefully going to start painting more Forerunner pictures, so they could be used in vol 2. Or if someone makes their own story about the forerunner, then maybe they could use those paintings.

  • 01.22.2011 10:14 AM PDT

The Razor.

For the honour of the Mirratord.

Thanks for the criticism, Database. I think that we might be having some longer stories, but many of us (since we are young writers) find writing longer stories challenging. I am currently working on this problem with some longer original work, but the 8 to 15 page range is my comfort zone.

Thanks for the suggestion, though. And on the "to be continued" thing, Absconditus by ajw34307 is the first part of an ongoing story that he will be continuing.

  • 01.22.2011 11:05 AM PDT

They're all good in my opinion. We all put in a lot of hours. But keep the comments coming, everyone.

  • 01.23.2011 2:36 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Posted by: DataBase90
Posted by: Mr Evil 37
In all seriousness, I think we can all agree that "Miss Isabella" was fantastic. I think it as my favourite in the document.
That's the only one I read completely. The others just didn't appeal to me. The pics were cool all cool...

Honestly, it wasn't as good as I expected it to be. Short stories just aren't that good as long ones.

How about, for your next Volume, you take long stories, but just add chapters of them. Make it like a "to be continued" for the next volumes...

Overall, I'll give Volume I a 7/10


I'm a little offended, actually. From where I'm standing, it seems you've allowed your personal opinion on short stories cloud you judgement on the overall quality of the product.

We spent about 6 months writing, drawing, editing and fine-tuning every aspect of the document, I find it unfair that you disregard the effort because you're disappointed that we're not writing longer stories, not all of us can pull an Insurrection you know?

Plus you say you only read 1 story out of about 9 completely, I appreciate the feedback but it's... well, baseless.

  • 01.24.2011 11:13 AM PDT

Posted by: ajw34307
not all of us can pull an Insurrection you know?


Trademark.

And yes, that was a little rude, Database. People put a lot of effort and time into this. People unlike myself, who did nothing and got my name in anyway simply for radiating pure awesome.

[Edited on 01.24.2011 12:24 PM PST]

  • 01.24.2011 12:22 PM PDT

The Razor.

For the honour of the Mirratord.

I agree with what Connor and Alex said, Database. If you gave it 7/10 after reading each story thoroughly, then that would be fair enough, but you didn't, so your judgement is slightly baseless.

  • 01.24.2011 1:02 PM PDT

Reading ALL of the stories and looking at ALL of the art is important. It's the entire purpose of Revolutions.

But if you fancy yourself a great writer or artist and want to contribute to the next volume, then head on over to the Secrets Within Group.

Keep reading.

  • 02.04.2011 12:27 AM PDT

I'm struggling to download the PDF file is there any reason for this?
I cant get passed 5%

  • 02.21.2011 2:31 PM PDT

No new games, catching up with the world, and filling it with the name of SpazDragon, the dragon with a spas-12.

I wanted to contribute a poem, but I don''t know if I'm ready yet...

I got good feedback from classmates and everything, even my teacher, but I don't know what to expect from the world as a whole.

  • 02.21.2011 3:33 PM PDT

"You dead yet? No? You will be!"

"How you like them pears? Guess what I mean by pears."

"I'm gonna rip off his partridge and kick him in the pear tree!"

I see but one flaw: artifact was spelt wrong.

  • 02.25.2011 6:03 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Posted by: Big fat slob 50
I see but one flaw: artifact was spelt wrong.


Artefact is how we Brits spell it.

  • 02.26.2011 3:32 AM PDT

The Razor.

For the honour of the Mirratord.

Posted by: ajw34307
Posted by: Big fat slob 50
I see but one flaw: artifact was spelt wrong.


Artefact is how we Brits spell it.


Is it?

  • 02.26.2011 6:57 AM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Posted by: Mr Evil 37
Posted by: ajw34307
Posted by: Big fat slob 50
I see but one flaw: artifact was spelt wrong.


Artefact is how we Brits spell it.


Is it?


Yes, Elliott. You should know this, then again you can't distinguish between "roll" and "role" either. ;)

  • 02.26.2011 8:20 AM PDT

The Razor.

For the honour of the Mirratord.

I'm never going to live that down... ;)

  • 02.26.2011 12:40 PM PDT

@accordingto343

Your one stop shop for all of 343's fabulous errors and ridiculous notions in the Halo lore.

Posted by: Mr Evil 37
In all seriousness, I think we can all agree that "Miss Isabella" was fantastic. I think it as my favourite in the document.

Wow, I'm honored you think that.

  • 02.26.2011 1:06 PM PDT

@accordingto343

Your one stop shop for all of 343's fabulous errors and ridiculous notions in the Halo lore.

Posted by: AssaultCommand
I really think some of these stories should be made canon.

Which ones?

  • 03.01.2011 4:35 PM PDT

so if I go to wherever you guys want me to I can give my thoughts on ideas for future projects. Because I have quite a few you all might be interested in.

  • 03.01.2011 5:11 PM PDT

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