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Subject: [Novel] ODST Drop (Chapter 6 is out now)

Games I like:,
Half-Minute Hero
MBU
Portal
Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
Maps I like: Turf, Avalanche, Pylon, Sandbox, Breakpoint and many more.

This is my first time writing a story on this forum so im sorry if the first few parts a little short. The beginning is broing but it gets better as you go along. Hers the back cover text:

I was a new recruit. Was good at my training, Maybe a little too good. Thats when they told me I would be an ODST.

Critic it if you could, and tell me what you think. Thanks for Reading!
Chapter 1:Meet the ODST
Chapter 2: Welcome to Reach!
Chapter 3: Strangers may be Rebels
Chapter 4: You did what?
Chapter 5: The knowing
Chapter 6; The Job

Thanks to Ofthebloodguard for suggesting the name Echo! Couldn't have done any of this story with out support of him!

[Edited on 02.18.2011 10:24 PM PST]

  • 01.09.2011 2:53 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] ODST drop (part one out)

Games I like:,
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Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
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Chapter 1: Meet The ODST

"Get over here son!" came the voice of the Staff Seargant. I looked up from the gruesome training every new recruit in the corps recieved."Youv'e been chosen for some speacial training. You've been reassigned to Reach". Reach. Home of the UNSC's miltary core. The home of all the weapons and ships we could muster. Wondering why I had been re-assigned, I got up quickly and traveled to my room,. My 3 roomates were out training.I wondered what my roomates would think when they got back. Probaly grateful that there wasnt another person in the small room for the night. Sighing, I gathered up my small personal belongings and put them in my backpack. As I left the room and walked down the empty hallway, I heard someone grunting in annoyment. I peered into the room, and saw another recruit closing a suitcase. "Need a bit of help?" I asked. After the suitcase was closed, He gave me his thanks. "Why are you leaving?' I asked him. He told me he had been re-assigned to Reach. As I exited the room, I muttered to him "See you on the flight out". I left him in a state of confusion.

When I arrived back at the training grounds, a tall man in jet black armour stood next to the seargant. His head was covered by a dark helmet, matching his armour. "So this is the boy?" he said dryly. The seargant nodded. "This is him. You ready to go kid?" he asked me. I nodded quickly. The seargant laughed. The man in black armour gestured for me to follow him. As we walked towards the transport, I heared several marines whisper something about an ODST. I wondered what that meant. As we approcahed the Transport, I noticed the other soilder with the suitcase was with us. I nodded in his dirction. The man in black armour nodded. "You better get to know one of your new teamates".

Later that night we boarded a UNSC frigate Lunar Sunshine. I read up on the ODST's an learned that they were the elite soilders. Something a simple city kid would never learn in their lifetime. And that was me. A young 17 year old city kid who had heard the horrible incidents that occured on Harvest, Green hills and all the other outer colonies. As we left Earth's athmosphere, I knew that my life would change forever.


[Edited on 01.09.2011 9:14 PM PST]

  • 01.09.2011 7:37 PM PDT
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Posted by: chotato
smart, interesting, seems out of place.


Official fan of Assassin's Creed, Call of Duty, (Problem with that?) Halo, and Bungie, also a total gaming junkie.

Clean it up, fix some spelling and grammatical mistakes, and make it 'bout two paragraphs long instead of one big wall, and you'll have a great story.

[Edited on 01.09.2011 8:02 PM PST]

  • 01.09.2011 7:58 PM PDT
Subject: ODST's of Reach

Games I like:,
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Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
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Thanks

  • 01.09.2011 8:00 PM PDT

Games I like:,
Half-Minute Hero
MBU
Portal
Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
Maps I like: Turf, Avalanche, Pylon, Sandbox, Breakpoint and many more.

Part two is coming soon

  • 01.09.2011 9:27 PM PDT
Subject: [Novel] ODST drop (Part 2 out NOW)

Games I like:,
Half-Minute Hero
MBU
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Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
Maps I like: Turf, Avalanche, Pylon, Sandbox, Breakpoint and many more.

Chapter 2: Welcome to Reach!

We were on Lunar Sunshine for 2 days. I learned that the man with the suitcases name was Jacob, and he had left his mother when he decided to join the corps. His father was MIA. We became good friends, bonding over our constant quizes to the mysterious ODST. It was unerving talking to him. The dark visor that hid his features made talking to him rocket science. We wre taken out to he humid plains of Reach, the UNSC's training grove where they could do as they pleased. When we arrived, we were instructed to go to the Dormitory area. Thinking the worst, I entered the dorm, and found no one else. No various toys and gadgets. No smell of sweat on the floor. Just a simple room. Bed, Table, chair and chest of drawers. I put my backpack down and lay on the bed. Thoughts stabbed at my mind like sharp sticks. Why were we here? Who was the man behind the visor? Or, more importantly, what was? Eventually I drifted into a dreamless sleep.

The next morning, I was awoken by a loud bang!. I looked at my watch, given to me by my Father before he left. 5:00 am, It read. Groggily, I rose and realised I had slept in my clothes i wore the previous day. The bang came again, and i hurried to the door, gently opening it. The bang came again, right in my face. I fell back and yelped, only to realise it was the ODST with a metal rubbish lid and a wooden spoon. "Get up!" he yelled at my figure. I rose, and said "What the hell? It's 5 o'clock in the morning! They didnt make us get up this late on Earth!" That only bought me another bang in the face. "Well this isnt Earth is it?" His voice was low, but deadly. He took me to the armoury. I was surprised to see Jacob there. His face seemed to imply he had the same treatment this morning. "You two have been chosen to be ODST. You showed promise in your training, so please don't let me down. Apparently, I have to teach you the ways of an ODST. Let me assure you, I'm the best in the buisness." When he saw we listening, he continued "Here are your armour suits. There a bit outdated, I'm afraid. These are only training suits, to get you in the feel of wearing it all the time." "Now lets go get brekfast" He said, and clapped his hands together.

We entered the Mess hall, and saw 2 other black-clad figures sitting at a table. I quickly grabbed some food and sat down next to them. One of them whispered "So you got the talk from the sarge? Don't worry, He's always like that to new recruits. Just give it some time and he'll treat you like kings." I nodded, and looked at what food i had picked up in my haste. A small box of orange juice and a bacon sandwhich. What luck! We ate together in silcence. The seargant, Or as his codename was called, flame sat at another table. After our small brekfast, the training began.

We began with weapon training. We were each handed a Designated Marksman Rifle. I had seen the other soilders use them before. They were loud, but got the job done. I noticed this certain one had some modifactions. It still had the scope, but it also hap and laser pointer in-built and a small metal pipe at the end. Noticing my confusion, one of the other ODST in the sqaud said "ODST grade. Silcenced, more accurate, and they won't shake around in your hands when you fire." he finished with a wink. I noticed that none of the others wore their helmets either. Only Flame did. I fired, and was surpirsed I was a good shot. The sniper was a different matter. The large weapon was unweildy to my small hands, and I missed almost every shot. We continued training weapons for the rest of the day, and picking up a small dinner of a roast potato and a ham sandwhich, I went into a patchy sleep.

[Edited on 01.10.2011 12:50 AM PST]

  • 01.10.2011 12:34 AM PDT

Games I like:,
Half-Minute Hero
MBU
Portal
Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
Maps I like: Turf, Avalanche, Pylon, Sandbox, Breakpoint and many more.

PLease comment, This is my first try at this sort of thing and i would appreciate some feedback, to know people are reading. Critic it if you can, tell me whats bad and whats good.

  • 01.10.2011 12:52 AM PDT

It looks good enough, grammatically speaking. But it needs more character development. Keep it up, though-this could be great.

  • 01.10.2011 1:03 AM PDT

Games I like:,
Half-Minute Hero
MBU
Portal
Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
Maps I like: Turf, Avalanche, Pylon, Sandbox, Breakpoint and many more.

Got it. Thanks Ill work a little more on characters in the next part

  • 01.10.2011 1:10 AM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!

I like this story. Although, along with the suggestion of more character development, would you describe the scenery a bit more, please? These things would make your story even better. Keep up the good work.

  • 01.10.2011 3:47 AM PDT

Games I like:,
Half-Minute Hero
MBU
Portal
Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
Maps I like: Turf, Avalanche, Pylon, Sandbox, Breakpoint and many more.

Will do. It's good to know I have a few readers. Thanks for the input!

  • 01.10.2011 2:29 PM PDT
Subject: [Novel] ODST Drop (Part 2 out NOW)

Games I like:,
Half-Minute Hero
MBU
Portal
Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
Maps I like: Turf, Avalanche, Pylon, Sandbox, Breakpoint and many more.

Speacial thanks to Ph34r T3h R34p3r and OfTheBloodGuard for telling me what this sotry needed.

Chapter 3: Strangers may be Rebels

It was the sound that woke me. It was a small sound, barely a whisper, but it was there. And it was Hostile. Stalking through the dark room, I grabbed my "Training armour" and put it on over my clothes. I noticed that Flame had his on, as did the other two ODST, shadow and pulse. Jacob was still asleep. Pulling open the velcro keypad taht was located on my arm, I typed in: What is it? Seconds later, Pulses reply came: Most likely Rebels. They have a base on these plains, but it has some sort of dampening field so we can't find it. Jacob's name appeared inside my helmets HUD. Soon after, his voice filled my helmet loudly. "What is it guys?" and I heard a loud groan. Flame Whispered loudly "Will you shut up boy!?". Underneath his voice I heard Shadow chuckling silenty to himself. Falmes voice quickly took over "Let's get to the armoury. Thankfully the ODST quarters are close by. Stay close and be quiet". We entered the hall ready for someone to strike from the darkness. No one did, but i had the feeling someone was watching us. As we neared the Armoury door, We ralised it was magnetically sealed. "Pulse, get to work" Came Flames fierce whisper. I soon realised why Pulse was called Pulse. He fiddeled with the door controls, and after a series of eletric sparks, the door slid open. "Grab what you need and get ready for combat situations' Falme said. "I call shotgun!" came Shadows cheerful voice. As Shadow ran in to grab his pruized shotgun, He was suddenly tackled. 'Well hello there" An alien voice came from behind us. As i turned around, I realised I had made a aftal mistake, as more things swarmed from the armoury. Then I blacked out.

I awoke in a Prison cell. My armour was gone, and so were my weapons. Of course, Im a prisoner now I thought, my mind awakening. I heard a few sighs as my comrades groggily rose to their feet. "Damm it to Hell' I heard Flame say. "Just be thankful were not dead" replied curtly. I wondered why I wasnt dead. We were in ODST unifroms. I looked across the bland cell. Gray cement all around. Flame, Pulse and Jacob working on an escape plan. Shadow trying to figure out the best time to steal a gun and shoot his way out. A small wodden bench hanging off the wall by two chanins. And a huge iron gate that led to the depths of the prison. I knew I was going to be here for a while.

After what seemed like hours, I heard footsteps. It wasn't had, seeming the only other noise was the quiet muttering of the 3 ODSTs trying to find a way out. Or, more correctly, 2 ODSTs and a half. The source of the footsteps approached our gate. It was a tall man, wearing a white button-up shirt and a long black cape. How medieval. His voice was a different matter. "So these are the ODST's?" he asked the guards. One of them nodded. "These ar' the priso'ers me lord" He had a thick country accent, that suggested he had no proper education as a child. The man in the capes voice was high pitched, girly. I wondered how anyone took him serisouly when he talked. Pulse seemed to be thinking along the same lines. As the caped man spoke, Pulse let out a small laugh. "Find something do you?" the man asked. "Yeah, your sister called, she wants her voice back" This arose a barrage of laughter from all of the ODST's. and even the guards chuckled a bit. "Well mr ODST, you just earned you and your friends no meals for the rest of the week. Let's see what your friends have to say" He added smugly, hoping that this ODST's comrades would pound the living daylights out of him. This only brought another round of laughter. Fuming, the caped man left the group with tears of laughter in their eyes. They would pay. He just needed the right time.

"Good that should get us off the radar" Came pulses voice. What did he mean? "Good going there Pulse, Now we just need to put this plan into action. Jacob, please kick the wall" Flame said sweetly. Jacob, wide grin over his face, Ran up to a grayish brownish part in the wall and let loose. A Huge crack appeared in the wall. He did it again, this time succsefully crumbling a small hole in the wall. Big enough o crawl through! "Good job boy, Your new name is Crack." Flame whispered. Pulse nodded. They crawled out of the cell and found themselves i a pre-dawn darkness. They were in the middle of a huge open feild, with targets all around them. Sitiing in the centre of the field, an array of weapons lay in a box. "Yes! a Shoutgun!" Came shadows voice. I thought he was a little crazy, but Pulse whispered in my ear, "He's more of the shoot first ask no questions later". After we got suited up with weapons, a light rain came. "Okay, we need to get out of here and find our way back to the base." Flame instructed. They ran across the field. There saw the gate, unguarded. They sprinted, almost out, Then Crack fell over a tripwire.

[Edited on 01.10.2011 7:34 PM PST]

  • 01.10.2011 2:58 PM PDT
Subject: [Novel] ODST Drop (Part 3 out NOW)

Games I like:,
Half-Minute Hero
MBU
Portal
Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
Maps I like: Turf, Avalanche, Pylon, Sandbox, Breakpoint and many more.

Part 4 is coming in a few days

  • 01.10.2011 8:15 PM PDT
Subject: [Novel] ODST drop (Part 2 out NOW)

Nice man, thanks!

  • 01.11.2011 12:07 AM PDT

Games I like:,
Half-Minute Hero
MBU
Portal
Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
Maps I like: Turf, Avalanche, Pylon, Sandbox, Breakpoint and many more.

Is there anything that needs improving?

  • 01.11.2011 1:02 AM PDT
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Bungie.net member Since 2001

"A hero need not speak. When he is gone, the world will speak for him"
"You are the last of your kind: bred for combat, built for war. You're the master of any weapon, pilot of any vehicle, and fear no enemy"

Very nice.

  • 01.11.2011 2:12 AM PDT

Games I like:,
Half-Minute Hero
MBU
Portal
Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
Maps I like: Turf, Avalanche, Pylon, Sandbox, Breakpoint and many more.

Part 4 may take a while, my brain is blocked.

  • 01.11.2011 10:03 PM PDT
Subject: [Novel] ODST Drop (Chapter 5 is out now)

Games I like:,
Half-Minute Hero
MBU
Portal
Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
Maps I like: Turf, Avalanche, Pylon, Sandbox, Breakpoint and many more.

Chapter 4: Who did that?
It happened in a blur. Alarms rang in the distance, every light was turned on in the barracks, and pretty soon we were screwed. The last thing i rember was being whacked on the head and blacking out.

I woke up in a warehouse. It was big, dark and smelled like old cheese. I glanced around and saw my teammates tied to chairs. I also noticed that equipment from our own camp was in the warehouse. I felt a searing pain in my arm, and saw that I had been stabbed multiple times with a crude knife. Then I blacked out again.

I was aroused by the voice. The voice of the caped man. As he approached my slumped body, I saw him smile. Then he held up a needle. My eyes widened, wondering if he was going to poison me. "Relax, This is just a... Medication to make you feel better." He added with a grin. As he made those final few centimetres towards me, I felt as though my life was over. But a large bang and the cries of the rebel infantry stalled his hand. "What is it you fool" He squeaked, his girly voice kicking in. "Siruh, Theres somethin' in t'e woods! It like nothin' we ev'r seen before!" Then a green light hit him in the back. He collasped with a grunt. The sound of assualt rifles firing in the distance came though the empty door. But it wasn't empty for long.

Small creatures walked in, A cone on their backs. They saw us, Squaeled and started to open fore. I rolled out the way with my chair, but it was to late for the man in the cape. He got hit sqaure in the chest. Out of the darkness, Blades voice shot out "Get in here boy so we can untie you!" I had never been happier to hear his voice. As i sprinted towards the source of the sound, more bolts of green energy hit my chair. It dissentragted. Realising i was free, I made the last few metres and Found our little group fiddling with the wall. "How are we supposed to get out of here?" I asked urgently. "Stand back guys" Crack's voice was troubled. " 3...2...1.. Go!" The wall exploded. "Come on!" As we ran out, I noticed the pile of dynamite next to the wall fragments. Then i Banged into something hard. I Fell over onto my back, and looked up. It was a UNSC falcon, probaly taken from our base. "Hop aboard!" Pulse said. As we climed aboard, Green bolts of energy hit the side of the falcon. "Take her off Pulse!" I yelled shakily. As we rose from the ground, a large Green bolt of plasma hit the side. Suddenly the falcon turned off.

It was a close call. The falcons chain guns were firing full blast, while Pulse desprtaly tried to raise us off the ground. I noticed that the landing pad we were on was full of gasoline container. Aiming one of the chain guns, I fired on the closest gasoline tank. The explosion made the Landing pad light up like it was 12:00 Pm. As we started to rise, I had a clear look at what was shooting at us. They wore masks and were quite small. They ran around on fire, until on of them exploded. The others followed. As we left the base, I took one final look at it. Most of the buildings were destoryed, the tallest alight with purple fire. Turning away, I heard Flame say "The covenant are on Reach".

[Edited on 02.04.2011 1:31 AM PST]

  • 01.14.2011 11:20 PM PDT

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Half-Minute Hero
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Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
Maps I like: Turf, Avalanche, Pylon, Sandbox, Breakpoint and many more.

Chapter 5: The knowing

Espoz,Northern Ice shelf, Reach 902 Hours

"We know Flame". It had been several hours since we escaped from the rebel base. I suggested we moved back to our own base, but as always Flame had other ideas. He told us we needed to report this infomation to ONI as soon as possible. When he said the name of the office of naval intellgince I stood rigid in my seat. This was going to be a very awkward trip. We landed on a top-side landing pad, and were greeted by an ONI officer. He attempted to ask for our ID but Flame just pushed pat him and charged into the base. The officer looked realtivly young, and had never ecountered such brutal behaviour. He shrank back behind a Fuel tank as our small group marched in perfect usinion towards th secret ONI hq. After a few minutes, I met one of the biggest Jerks of my life. His name was captain Duncan. He pushed in front of us, and started to order Flame around, sayng he was acting upon treason by entering the base, and stating his rank many times. Eveauntally Pulse came up and pucnhed him cold. I heard most of the team chuckle as we passed his body. Then we met Dr Hasley.

"How do you know the covenant are on Reach" Demmanded Flame His voice was barely more than a growl. His face was a canvas of twisted hatred and pain. "A group of spartans encountered them while on a mission to restore communications with a UNSC base. They found the head of this force, but couldnt exterminate him." I gave a sharp intake of breath as I heard the word Spartans. The mythical Super soilders that had been whispered among th ranks of the marines in his first few days. They were the best of the best, faster and smarter than any other. The only problem was they were expensive. As I mulled this over, Dr Hasley continued, "We believe they are on a search mission. What they are looking for, however, we dont know. The same group of spartans who found the leader, or Zealot have dispatched there units to take out a covenant jammer. We havn't heard back from them yet. Im afraid that is all the knowledge that your" She pointed at me and the others-"Group can hear. The rest is solely for your ears." I looked at Flame, expecting him to say that he needed his team, but he just pointed his head at the door. Leaving, I wondered what they would be talking about.

It must have been a long conversation. We sat in the darkned room for 3 hours waiting for Flame to leave. Eveauntually Pulse and Crack started playing cards, while Shadow fell asleep. I just stared at the floor, thinking about what had happened to me so far. Being chosen as an ODST. Being kidnapped by rebels, then being saved by a much bigger threat. I wondered how the heros of the war managed. Admiral Preston cole. Lord Hood. All I know is that my time on reach was going to be one healluva of ride. Finnaly, Flame entered our secluded Hideaway in the hall. He stared at me for a long time. Finnaly, he spoke "Were being transported to the UNSC Honeysuckle. Lets move out." As we left the hall, I noticed several Oni officials still looking at me. My foot hit something, and I looked down to see the still body of the captain. No one else seemed to care he was still knocked out. Shrugging, I felt like there was something the others wanted to say, but Flames stance quickly showed the reason. We exited the office to the a Landing pad, where a Pelican was awating us. "Better get comfortable" Came Pulses short reply at my irritated posture. 'Its going to be a long time till we arrive."

We arrived on the Honeysuckle Around 7 hours later. The first thing we did was stop at the armoury. Flame grabbed out some new pairs of ODST armour. As I put it on, I noticed that Flames had a white streak on the shoulder. We then reported to the bridge and adressed the captain. Flame seemed to know him very well, and the two of them sat on the bridge chatting for for hours, while an ensign showed us our living quarters via datapad, and soon I was in the standard bunk of the UNSC. small, uncomfortable and hot as hell. I finnaly drifted off to a Dream filled sleep, where I dreamt of the streets I had grown up in on Earth, Fighting for survival. I rembered the Gangs who tried to kill me and my mother. I woke up in a cold sweat. Silently climbing down from my bunk, I head to the mess hall to get a midnigh snack to calm my nerves. On my way, I heard the Captain speaking to his commanding officer. "Do you think theyll do it this time Captain?" Came the officers voice. He had a scottish accent. "I believe so Mclivert. And if they do, we are going to be in one deep pit of hell.". Wondering what they were talking about, I leaned in closer. "But surely we have enough firepower..." Came mcliverts voice. "It doesnt matter about firepower of numbers. These...thingswill destory our ships one by one. then they will set fire to Reach. Youv'e prepared for this, as hav I. SO be ready" The captains voice was lower, as If painful memories had surfaced in his mind. As Flame had said on the pelican ride up, I was to curious about things and I should "Let nature do its thing". it was my curiosity that didnt prepare me. The door suddenly opened, as the captain was exiting, and both of them were surprised to see me eaves dropping on their conversation. "What in the worl-" Came the captains startled reply. Suddenly I was knocked to my feet. A large boom had sounded from outside the ships hull. It sounded as though the whole UNSC fleet was exiting slipsace at Reach. I ran in the room and looked out a nearby Porthole. A covenant cruiser had just exited slipsace no more than 200 kilometres away. As I looked closer, I saw Its blue guns started to power up.

The bridge swayed uneasily as The captain, mclivert and myself had entered. An officer on deck came over and said "The UNSC Big Ben is on the line. Want me to patch them through?" Go ahead,Notold" The captain said curtly. Static sounded on a nearby radio, then the voice of another captain cut through "Honeysuckle, do you require assistance?" The captain picked up a microphone headset and replied "Yes. Immediant support. we have a covenant cruiser right on our heels. Whats your ETA?" "Approximeatly 10 minutes. We'll come as soon as poss-ungh!" The captains voice suddenly cut off. "Repeat that captain?" Came our own captains voice. "Coveant corvetee coming right at us. Your going to have to deal with that cruiser yourself, were being hit hard!" "Its okay captain, well do our best. Im sending longswords to aid you." "No, dont. were overpowered. Were history. See you in hell!" The sound of gunfire could be heard, and the captains own crazy laugh suddenly cut off from the radio. " Sir, Im an ODST. Maybe Me and my squad could help?" The captain looked astounished. "You? An ODST? Why didnt you say so! get your armour on and your sqaudron. Take a shortsword onto that cruiser landing bay. well give you some support with our guns. Here." He handed me a card. "This is a clearance card to get into the armoury. Theres a remote controlled nuke in theres. Get to the centre of that ship and arm it. I'll give you 10 minutes to get out. No more, No less. If your not out by then Im going to actiate it. Now get going. Thats an order soilder!" He finished with a solid voice. Clutching the card, I hurried to the dorm were we were stationed. I bet there all ready in there armour I thought grimly, Imagining Flames comments. Dosnt matter, I thought to myself, We just need to get out of here.

[Edited on 02.06.2011 1:31 AM PST]

  • 02.04.2011 1:28 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] ODST drop (Part 2 out NOW)

Games I like:,
Half-Minute Hero
MBU
Portal
Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
Maps I like: Turf, Avalanche, Pylon, Sandbox, Breakpoint and many more.

Can someone please help me think of a nickname for the ODST whos narrating the story. He comes from the earths over crowded citys and hes a good un armed fighter. so please help

  • 02.04.2011 1:30 AM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!

Oh man, I haven't seen this story in ages, you're already up to Chapter 5? Good on you, mate. Good stuff so far, just watch your spelling/grammar/punctuation, it looks a tad messy.

As for your narrator's nickname, how about Echo? Shimmer? Batman? (lol)

  • 02.05.2011 2:10 AM PDT

Games I like:,
Half-Minute Hero
MBU
Portal
Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
Maps I like: Turf, Avalanche, Pylon, Sandbox, Breakpoint and many more.

Yes I know, I'll run through it tomorrow. Yes, I think batman would be a great name, but as I don't want to get sued, in going to go with echo. Thanks fir the help!

  • 02.05.2011 3:46 AM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!

Not a problem, dude. Happy to help.

  • 02.07.2011 3:36 AM PDT

If you can read this, that means I'm not a Shaolin monk...

yet.

Nice read, but you broke canon.

  • 02.07.2011 2:29 PM PDT

Games I like:,
Half-Minute Hero
MBU
Portal
Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
Maps I like: Turf, Avalanche, Pylon, Sandbox, Breakpoint and many more.

First off, This story lossely fits cannon. Second, How did I break cannon, I dont know sorry. Third, This is my first time please forgive my herecy :)
ANyway This story doesnt fit the cannon, but the events they take place in can (or did) happen. I dont think you know every single ship that fought at reach.

  • 02.07.2011 9:26 PM PDT

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