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Subject: .//MACHINIMA
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BCECOhS9Yn8

I need constructive criticism , opinions, and ideas. Thanks guys! :D Remeber this is my first try at machinima(First Attempt).

  • 01.18.2011 3:45 PM PDT

I'm like a rain drop in a storm.

Well... The camera angles are fine, the character movements are pretty fluid... Might want to work on that ending. The invisible Sangheili was a nice touch, but the last 2 seconds don't make much sense. If you were trying to show him dying from a different angle I would suggest keeping the camera in the same spot shown at 1:27-1:28, but some how zoom out and upward, kind of rolled together. Also add a little music, silent films are ok, but music gets the emotions flowing.

Anyways nice job. ^_^

[Edited on 01.18.2011 5:40 PM PST]

  • 01.18.2011 5:39 PM PDT
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Posted by: MVerd0722
Well... The camera angles are fine, the character movements are pretty fluid... Might want to work on that ending. The invisible Sangheili was a nice touch, but the last 2 seconds don't make much sense. If you were trying to show him dying from a different angle I would suggest keeping the camera in the same spot shown at 1:27-1:28, but some how zoom out and upward, kind of rolled together. Also add a little music, silent films are ok, but music gets the emotions flowing.

Anyways nice job. ^_^


Thx! I'll try and work on it

  • 01.18.2011 6:27 PM PDT
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@Ghost Bn I joined the machinima group and I hope I can be a good addition to it.

  • 01.18.2011 7:05 PM PDT