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Posted by: MVerd0722
Well... The camera angles are fine, the character movements are pretty fluid... Might want to work on that ending. The invisible Sangheili was a nice touch, but the last 2 seconds don't make much sense. If you were trying to show him dying from a different angle I would suggest keeping the camera in the same spot shown at 1:27-1:28, but some how zoom out and upward, kind of rolled together. Also add a little music, silent films are ok, but music gets the emotions flowing.
Anyways nice job. ^_^
Thx! I'll try and work on it