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Subject: S-022

I'm going to contradict all of the things that I've thought about concerning fan-fiction in the past year. I used to think, and sometimes still do, that fanfiction writers are idiotic fat chicks who can't use grammar or get a date. I've decided to become more open minded, thus writing the following story.

First, though, I feel that an introduction is necessary.

S-022 is about Spartan-II 022, as foretold by the title. He demonstrates a rarer, lighter side of the Orion-II program. He's even unofficially thought of as a "failed" spartan, due to his lack of seriousness.

The story starts with the beginning of the Orion-II project, with our protagonist getting "recruited" by Halsey.

Note - This is simply an introduction post. I will start writing in a while. Please tell me what you think, when I write it!

EDIT - The story now starts with 022's graduation from the program, and he remembers his ordeal through training, etc.

[Edited on 02.23.2011 7:13 PM PST]

  • 01.27.2011 4:39 PM PDT

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Sounds interesting.

  • 01.27.2011 6:43 PM PDT

Good to see that you've changed your opinion. Can't wait to read your story!

  • 01.27.2011 6:47 PM PDT
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  • 01.28.2011 2:24 PM PDT

Whoa, holy crap. Didn't think that this thread was still alive. Thanks for the feedback on the idea, but I'm having a little trouble planning the story out.

I'll start when I finish Reach on Legendary, or get frustrated with it and ragequit (Campaign, I mean).

Either way, look forward to it.

  • 02.16.2011 4:58 PM PDT

How I got mine: Frank Helsing

Sounds pretty interesting. If you're having some trouble getting the story down try looking at it in terms of acts. Most stories follow a 3-act system, beginning, middle, and end or in terms of content; introduction, conflict, and resolution. This might help get the ole juices flowing. Also, a lot of hero stories have a mentor to help the hero in his/her time of need. It is only when the mentor is no longer able to watch over the hero they realize their true potential (in most cases the mentor dies). Good luck with the writing!

  • 02.16.2011 5:22 PM PDT

Thanks!

I'm afraid that I'll get a LOT of canonical things incorrect, though. I haven't really read the novels... yet. Hopefully I won't make any truly terrible mistakes.

  • 02.16.2011 5:24 PM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!


Posted by: Veronox
Thanks!

I'm afraid that I'll get a LOT of canonical things incorrect, though. I haven't really read the novels... yet. Hopefully I won't make any truly terrible mistakes.


You might want some help then. Message some of the other writers around here, and if you have a plan of your story, then ask them to help you and show them what you've got so far. They may be able to show you where your story would fit into canon. (I've only read the Cole Protocol so far, so I won't be of any use to you.)

And I'm excited to read this.

  • 02.16.2011 9:19 PM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!


Posted by: AssaultCommand
Inb4Wolverfrog


Oh, AssaultCommand, you so crazy.

  • 02.16.2011 11:12 PM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!


Posted by: AssaultCommand
Posted by: OfTheBloodguard

Posted by: AssaultCommand
Inb4Wolverfrog


Oh, AssaultCommand, you so crazy.
I so crazy?
No you so crazy, man!


Haha, man, this is funny.

  • 02.17.2011 8:09 PM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!


Posted by: Veronox

Posted by: AssaultCommand
Inb4Wolverfrog


What's Wolverfrog?
He's a person. Like you and I.

  • 02.18.2011 10:17 PM PDT

Games I like:,
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MBU
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Posted by: OfTheBloodguard

Posted by: Veronox

Posted by: AssaultCommand
Inb4Wolverfrog


What's Wolverfrog?
He's a person. Like you and I.

Hes one of those famous people on these forums. Writes a lot of stories. Guess you beat him to this topic

  • 02.18.2011 10:49 PM PDT


Posted by: Multijirachi

Posted by: OfTheBloodguard

Posted by: Veronox

Posted by: AssaultCommand
Inb4Wolverfrog


What's Wolverfrog?
He's a person. Like you and I.

Hes one of those famous people on these forums. Writes a lot of stories. Guess you beat him to this topic


"Beat him to this topic"? You mean... there's a chance that he could steal my idea?

  • 02.21.2011 5:11 PM PDT

Posted by: Veronox

Posted by: Multijirachi

Posted by: OfTheBloodguard

Posted by: Veronox

Posted by: AssaultCommand
Inb4Wolverfrog


What's Wolverfrog?
He's a person. Like you and I.

Hes one of those famous people on these forums. Writes a lot of stories. Guess you beat him to this topic


"Beat him to this topic"? You mean... there's a chance that he could steal my idea?


Why the hell would I ever do that? Idiot.

  • 02.21.2011 6:45 PM PDT


Posted by: Wolverfrog

Why the hell would I ever do that? Idiot.
You all suck. Wolvers is win.

  • 02.21.2011 6:50 PM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!


Posted by: The Master Ark
You all suck. Wolvers is win.

You all suck.
If you need me, I'll be crying in the corner.

  • 02.21.2011 10:29 PM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!


Posted by: AssaultCommand
Posted by: OfTheBloodguard

Posted by: The Master Ark
You all suck. Wolvers is win.

You all suck.
If you need me, I'll be crying in the corner.

Don't worry, he's just one of those bridge trolls...
There's a ferry over there, so next time, avoid bridges.

Ah, son of two men. I was just looking over that way. How did I not see that ferry?

  • 02.22.2011 8:49 PM PDT

'K guys, back on topic.

Check the edit in the first post.

Also, Wolverfrog, nice ego you've got there. Way to shoot me down for fearing my idea would be stolen, real nice of you to criticize a new writer.

  • 02.23.2011 7:15 PM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!

I like the idea of this, to be honest. Capturing a "lighter side" of SPARTANs is something I've been trying to do for a while now.

Posted by: Veronox
Also, Wolverfrog, nice ego you've got there. Way to shoot me down for fearing my idea would be stolen, real nice of you to criticize a new writer.

O_O *gets out of thread before nuclear warfare begins*

  • 02.23.2011 8:17 PM PDT

Posted by: Veronox
Also, Wolverfrog, nice ego you've got there. Way to shoot me down for fearing my idea would be stolen, real nice of you to criticize a new writer.


I don't care, you insulted me. Next time, don't jump to conclusions because of a couple of stupid words people post in a thread. If you looked at this forum properly for even a few seconds you'd see that I've written a few fan fictions already and that I have ample imagination, and so why would I ever steal an idea?

Good luck, regardless. Are you sure you should post it though? Someone could steal it, after all.

Seriously, it's just fan fiction. Calm down.

[Edited on 02.24.2011 1:14 AM PST]

  • 02.24.2011 1:11 AM PDT

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