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Subject: Dominion: A Halo fanfic

This is a Halo fanfic I have been working on, I need feedback on how I'm doing so far please. I think you'll enjoy it!

http://docs.google.com/document/d/1bg6CH0dZFtvuFCelp_p2O6-bXb jww4D8QOgWgs7_w6I/edit?hl=en&authkey=CKGZhMAH



[Edited on 01.31.2011 9:42 AM PST]

  • 01.31.2011 9:41 AM PDT

I Guess no one cares

  • 02.01.2011 11:31 AM PDT
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Posted by: chotato
smart, interesting, seems out of place.


Official fan of Assassin's Creed, Call of Duty, (Problem with that?) Halo, and Bungie, also a total gaming junkie.

It is just slow around here, and may I suggest you Copy and Paste the story to here?

  • 02.01.2011 11:36 AM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!

I like it. It's pretty good so far.

  • 02.02.2011 2:20 AM PDT

I can't copy and paste the story, says it has invalid characters or something like that

  • 02.06.2011 7:47 PM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!

Hey, copy and paste your story into this. That should get rid of all the invalid characters.

  • 02.07.2011 3:25 AM PDT