- x Awal x
- |
- Exalted Heroic Member
Nice work capturing the crime noir style. Some tips to make improve it a little;
It's a little dark to really make out anything other than the Spartan visors. Maybe try bringing up the brightness a tad. It's a real shame to miss out on all of the detail you put into the scenery.
Also, since we can't see the Spartan's face, we have no idea if he's thinking to himself or actually talking. Maybe try using a slight reverb effect when he talks to himself so we get the feeling that its in his head and to make the distinction between when its to himself and when its to others.
Overall though I thought you did a pretty good job.