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Subject: Rich Barlowe - Private Eye

When Nolan Bowen's memory conflicts with reality, everything changes... Partial Reminiscence: Revelation
Perspective
Loyalty
Repercussion

Rich Barlowe is a former police detective working as a private eye. Things are going slowly for him until he receives a fateful phone call...

Rich Barlowe - Private Eye

[Edited on 02.18.2011 11:56 PM PST]

  • 02.18.2011 11:56 PM PDT

How I got mine: Frank Helsing

Nice work capturing the crime noir style. Some tips to make improve it a little;

It's a little dark to really make out anything other than the Spartan visors. Maybe try bringing up the brightness a tad. It's a real shame to miss out on all of the detail you put into the scenery.

Also, since we can't see the Spartan's face, we have no idea if he's thinking to himself or actually talking. Maybe try using a slight reverb effect when he talks to himself so we get the feeling that its in his head and to make the distinction between when its to himself and when its to others.

Overall though I thought you did a pretty good job.

  • 02.19.2011 4:58 AM PDT