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Subject: [Novel] Dreadnought: The Sangheili-San 'Shyuum war. [Prolouge i...

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From Farmer to Leader

[Chapter List]
Prolouge
Prolouge: The opening

Goly'um wiped his brow. It had been a had day in the fields, toiling amongst the many growths. I hpe it all pays off I thought. A sudden voice caught me off guard, causing me to stumble and roll bakwards. I fell with a soft thud. Opening my eyes, I saw my lovely partner Ros'tu, her smiling mandibles gleaming in the lae afternoon sun. Offering her hand, I gratefully accepted and rose to my feet, to see my 1-year old son San'shy. He hid behind his mothers leg. "Goly'um! Your work is beyond the expectations the Forerunners have. Here" She finished offering me a glass of my favourite drink, cool, flavoured water. Embracing in its wondeful flavours, I took a long swig. "That is much better, my lovely Ros. ANd How are you, my favourite little son/" I ended with a highert one. I had read somewhere in a parenting scroll that children seemed to trust people who did it. It seemed to work, as his little head bobbed out from behind Ros's leg. "Here." I handed him a small cube with a tny black button on the top. Curious, little San held it in his hands and pressed the button. Almost instantly, a small dancing robot sprug up and clapped its hands on his palm. He iggled loudly, his face lit with delight. "This is yours, my child. My father gave it to me when I was your age. It is very advanced." My words had n imoact on him, as the robot stopped. His face fell, but as I pressed the button again, he resumed his laughing. "Gol, I believe it is time to prepare for the sermon. You never miss it." "Ah, of course. My father is the town priest after all"

I was sitting in the front row of our small, backwater towns church. Behind my father, stood an erected foreruner artifact. Only the blessed may hold it. After a long time of praying, it was over. The small room, with its bare wooden walls ans satined glass windows, was soon empty, as many rushed home to bask in the warmth of their fires. "Father, that was amazing. The Forerunners must have taken great care in creating you." Smiling, my father waved me away, and went to his small room behind the church. Understanding, I left the church and decided to drop in on my child-hood friend,Trol'frum. Taking a shortcut, I gazed at the thousands of stars above us. Legend has it, every Forerunner in the galaxy is one of those stars. My stroll soon slowed down, and I stopped. Staring at a brgiht star, I thought I could see a hole opening up in soace. Little did I know, that hole would be the start of the long war against my people.


[Edited on 02.23.2011 9:59 PM PST]

  • 02.21.2011 1:26 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] The Elite-Prohet War

i like the idea !

  • 02.22.2011 9:25 AM PDT

-Gr33n Knight

My stories:

Streams of Fire

Jiralhanae

Sounds like a great topic for a story. Wish I would have thought about it first. I hope you are well-versed on the ways of the Sangheili. They are a very distinct species, with a very honor-driven culture, very similar to the samurai of Japan.

If you're looking for an example of the way Sangheili behave, I would suggest taking a look through Wolverfrog's True Sangheili.

  • 02.22.2011 4:24 PM PDT

Games I like:,
Half-Minute Hero
MBU
Portal
Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
Maps I like: Turf, Avalanche, Pylon, Sandbox, Breakpoint and many more.


Posted by: Gr33n Knight
Sounds like a great topic for a story. Wish I would have thought about it first. I hope you are well-versed on the ways of the Sangheili. They are a very distinct species, with a very honor-driven culture, very similar to the samurai of Japan.

If you're looking for an example of the way Sangheili behave, I would suggest taking a look through Wolverfrog's True Sangheili.

Thanks for the good reviews on the idea, Ill read that once I finally finish insurrection (2 chapters to go)

Thanks for the info, If I can get this right, Im hoping its going to be the new Hot-Topic

  • 02.22.2011 9:33 PM PDT

Games I like:,
Half-Minute Hero
MBU
Portal
Halo 3 is the best Halo ever
Maps I like: Turf, Avalanche, Pylon, Sandbox, Breakpoint and many more.

Chapter 1 coming on saturday, I am working on this one as it seems to be the most rewarding, and its an original idea. So expect this one to have a great storyline, and now I am finally devoted to this. For the few other times I was just trying it out, but I think THIS is the story I need. Along with Grunty Quest

  • 03.16.2011 3:38 AM PDT