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Subject: Machinima- Installation 117 ep 1



Installation 117 ep 1

This is my first machinima so constructive feedback please.

Set a hundred years after the unsc fell apart and many goverments fighting each other than spliting. The result is that there are many clan set up that don't know why thier fighting. Set just before a deadly season before the nights of solace, Scopes has a plan to get supplies and fixer is forced to tag along.

  • 02.27.2011 1:55 PM PDT

Reach for Halo!

It was great.

Please permit me to have some constructive criticism, and I have some questions.

1) Try to adjust your aspect ratio so that you dont have the black boxes on either side of the video. If you dont know how to do that I can help you very easily

2)Audio is good. Not only is the music at a good volume, but the Voice work is pretty good too! The only thing I can add to this is at the end of the intro where you introduce the characters, the music cuts abruptly, and continues with a quieter song. Try to fading out or slowly reducing the volume instead of cutting.

3) The time change sequence was hilarious!

4) Try fading the different shots together. The abrupt cuts are weird, not to mention annoying.

5) Continue the story. You could do alot with this!

Alright,Question Time

1) What are you using for the screen capture?

2) What editing software are you using?

3) What mic are you using?










[Edited on 02.27.2011 2:14 PM PST]

  • 02.27.2011 2:11 PM PDT