- ROBERTO jh
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There's a few things you need to clarify. Most importantly, explain what slipspace is and how the Interplanetary War was brought on by the past (wasn't it like a Neo-Soviet regime or something?).
In fact, to be totall honest, none of that will make sense to a normal non-Halo fan. Since its a school project, I'd focus more on the human expansion, the Koslovic regime, and the Insurrection rather then the Covenant.
Or you could do both and explain how the Covenant fit as a symbol for the Christain Crusades against the "infidels," how it works as a metaphor for how we as a race never learn from our past and we're being tested for that.
Otherwise, as a fan, it was really good, but in the case of a class project, it really seems to me to be like a Halo fan taking the Covenant thing way to far.
Edit: In fact, you could focus more on the rise and fall of humanity more thouroughly rather then just being a summary of events. Put Reach in the spot light; it was our first major extrasolar achievement and was also our biggest downfall.
Building up the legacy of Reach will help give validity to the project of the past effecting the future.
[Edited on 03.02.2011 2:53 PM PST]