Any critiquing is welcome, in fact wanted.
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Parasitic growth soon to emerge
your empty hands soon to converge
emptiness fills your heart
when you two are apart
eyes locking at first glance
your fingers weave a deadly dance
loading up and logging on
all of your rage will soon be gone
strafing left while aiming right
they could not have seen this coming plight
no-scoping one and sticking the other
smiling while they run for cover
as your legs move and crotch meets face
you challenge them to take back their base
hearing them all whine and shout
you are a digital god without a doubt
dropping the sniper and holding the sword
ambitions fade at the oncoming horde
swatting away their meager retaliation
the only thing you want to hear is Extermination
advancing from a triple to an overkill
you have only begun to have your fill
hammer smack one and rocket the other two
a wraith, a tank, nothing they have can stop you
look at their team kills, call them pathetic
a K/D like that! they expect you to be sympathetic?
They all say claim cheated and you mod
less QQ you say and more applaud
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