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Subject: [Poem] Written for a friend on his birthday

Any critiquing is welcome, in fact wanted.

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Parasitic growth soon to emerge

your empty hands soon to converge

emptiness fills your heart

when you two are apart



eyes locking at first glance

your fingers weave a deadly dance

loading up and logging on

all of your rage will soon be gone



strafing left while aiming right

they could not have seen this coming plight

no-scoping one and sticking the other

smiling while they run for cover



as your legs move and crotch meets face

you challenge them to take back their base

hearing them all whine and shout

you are a digital god without a doubt



dropping the sniper and holding the sword

ambitions fade at the oncoming horde

swatting away their meager retaliation

the only thing you want to hear is Extermination



advancing from a triple to an overkill

you have only begun to have your fill

hammer smack one and rocket the other two

a wraith, a tank, nothing they have can stop you



look at their team kills, call them pathetic

a K/D like that! they expect you to be sympathetic?

They all say claim cheated and you mod

less QQ you say and more applaud
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  • 03.10.2011 5:31 AM PDT

-blam!- that was bad

  • 03.13.2011 7:07 AM PDT