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Subject: Halo: The Angels of Coral ~ Need a Plot Structure

Ignore my gamertag. It's actually Dragonzzilla.

Angels of Coral is my fanfic I'm writing. While I have basic information and plot, I don't know how to get it into a understandable structure. Assistance is requested.

[Edited on 03.24.2011 5:01 PM PDT]

  • 03.24.2011 4:59 PM PDT

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  • 03.24.2011 5:06 PM PDT

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Posted by: Wolverfrog
Not sure what you're asking here. Care to indulge us with a little clairvoyance?

  • 03.24.2011 5:18 PM PDT

Ignore my gamertag. It's actually Dragonzzilla.

Posted by: Wolverfrog
Not sure what you're asking here. Care to indulge us with a little clairvoyance?[/quote]
Miners uncover a Forerunner artifact on Coral, 30 meters of it. And ONI learns of it and sends in Spartans. Should they send in the Spartans before or after the Fall of Reach?

Well, if the Spartan Team goes into the Forerunner artifact on Coral, should the Covenant invade during they're inside the Artifact or after the Team exits the Artifact?

  • 03.24.2011 5:25 PM PDT

"I will show you how a true Prussian officer fights!"

"And i will show you where the iron crosses grow..."

- "Cross of Iron"

Thats almost like writing the whole story for you...

  • 03.24.2011 5:48 PM PDT

Ignore my gamertag. It's actually Dragonzzilla.

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  • 03.24.2011 6:04 PM PDT

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  • 03.25.2011 2:49 AM PDT

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But really am sweet at heart. =)

What I find works best for suspense is lead up to something, then totally change it at the last second.

I would suggest having them lose radio contact inside the artifact chamber, accidentally triggering a slipspace pulse that alerts the Covenant, and them coming out in the midst of an invasion.

  • 03.25.2011 7:12 AM PDT

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I'm not sure but I recently made a screenshot you could use for it called ~Angel~ so perhaps it could tie in with what you do. :)

  • 03.25.2011 7:13 PM PDT