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Subject: Looking for Critique on these Screenies

Red Team shooting at Griff...
Sarge: Donut your going out of turn!
Donut: What i thought that was my turn?
Sarge: No no no we go in a line, it goes you then me, then Simmons then back down to me then you, then me then me, then Simmons then me Simmons, me Simmons you Simmons me me me Simmons you, me..... then me again... IT MAKES PERFECT SENSE!

The Last Line

The Last Act of Defiance

Please post your thoughts on these two.

  • 03.25.2011 2:45 PM PDT
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No effects used. Not even looking through an explosion.

  • 03.25.2011 5:56 PM PDT

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Posted by: Wrath15
Please post your thoughts on these two.

You probably won't appreciate 'my thoughts,' but you were the one who asked for them.

The Last Line:
No effects. Doesn't follow the rule-of-thirds. You positioned it so that you can't see his gun which cuts off the viewers anticipation. The color of the spartan is red. There is no solid background. Needs widescreen.

The Last Act of Defiance:
No effects. Spartan laser is typically a bad choice for a weapon in screenshots. Doesn't follow the rule-of-thirds. Needs widescreen. Boring.

  • 03.25.2011 7:10 PM PDT