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Well I just want to play it right...
A list of things to improve:
Camera Work, (Don't use 3rd person cams, Don't use first person cams, make transitions between shots smooth, make camera movement smooth.
Voice acting, While it sounds like you have good equipment for recording you're trying to hard with your voice, The best voice acting comes from just using what you got not trying to sound like General Hardass all the time.
Dialouge, Improve it, add more of it.
Story, Same as above. You really just re-used a campaign story and swapped out some characters.
EDIT:
Music, Your Machinima featured a gross misuse of a halo soundtrack, I realize you probably don't have buku monies to go buy songs and make music, but use some other resources for music such as newgrounds or heck just pirate some movie and game soundtracks those can go far just not halo ones it doesn't work that way.
[Edited on 03.26.2011 4:16 PM PDT]