- Docterweegee
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So i'm making a vid and im looking for some people to take a look at my prolog, well, here it is.
2516- 117 kids from ages 6 to 8 are kidnaped and trained to be solders.
2525- Those 117 kids now 14 to 16 are augmented and 30 die and 12 were crippled, those 30 dead spartans were never actually dead, but were instead enlisted into a new program in secret.
2526-Those 30 form teams of 5 named after Greek gods and goddesses
2550- Those 6 teams are given MJOLNIR Mark V and team leaders are given Mark VI Prototypes.
2550- During a small space battle, the covenant bored all of the teams ships and kill 19 Spartans, The only survivors are ****-025 and ****-097 of Athena team, ****-074 of Hephaestus team, ****-063 of Poseidon team, ****-095 of Apollo team, ****-125 of Hermes team, and finally the untouched Hades team.
2550- On the way back from said space battle The Line in the Sand Athena teams ship, recovered the survivors of the lost ships and told Oni about the fight, Oni formed them into a new team on the spot.
2550- when entering slip-space back to Reach, Large traces of radiation are detected, and Athena gets sucked in bringing one ship with it.
Well thats it, tell me if i broke any cannon or if it just plain sucked, I also blocked the names.
Thx