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Subject: Someone please give their opinion on my work?

I like to think of myself as an AI - I hunger for information, and I know, one day, that hunger will be my ultimate demise.

http://s1177.photobucket.com/albums/x344/Eco_Maiden/Lineart/? action=view&current=Lineart_0001_Ghost_Beta.png

I have worked on this all day and had to redo it about 5 times. This is going to be number 1 in a series of ten. Each will be a different vehicle from the Halo Universe. I would greatly appreciate any and all opinions about my work.

[Edited on 04.26.2011 2:29 PM PDT]

  • 04.26.2011 2:29 PM PDT

How I got mine: Frank Helsing

Good start buddy. Your lines are clean and for the most part fairly detailed. However, it is kind of boring after the first 10 seconds. One simple thing you could do is use varying line weight. For instance, use thicker lines on the parts that are closer to the viewer and thinner lines on the parts further away. This is a simple technique used by illustrators to add depth to their otherwise flat drawings. You can also use thicker lines for areas that would be shadowed or darker than other spots. Lastly, you can use a thicker line for the entire outline of the shape and use thinner lines for all of the detail lines. This will help make your line art pop! Keep it up, hope this helps.

o XEROPAIN o

  • 04.26.2011 3:52 PM PDT

Pretty much everything the above dude said. Other than that it looks really nice. Better than I could ever do that's for sure.

  • 04.27.2011 7:23 AM PDT