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Posted by: Levian Nher
Posted by: Sigma617
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Posted by: Sigma617
Ever read Mr. Vociferous' Script?
that would make one hell of a movie.
EDIT: Oh god that was absolutely awful. let me dig up the Vociferous Script. that is how it should be made.
Here
So much better than that crap I just read.
WOW! Now this script is GOOD! I liked it a lot more, and it seemed more smooth.
I know right? that's the best script I've ever read. Mr. Garlands was absolute garbage compared to this.
I couldn't agree more. I just read a few pages and I love it so far, much better than Garland's.
I think Garland's isn't bad perse, but I am liking this other one much more so far (partly because of Johnson's presence ^^ teehee). I haven't gotten the chance to read much yet though.
I also really like the fact that the writer put Thel in too, sqeeeee, and Half-Jaw too, eeeeeee ^_^ And if this script is used to actually make a movie it could be explored what information was in the Artifact under SWORD base ad Thel thinks the Humans know something about Halo that the Covenant do not.
All in all I think this script is much better by far than Garland's and more in line with what Bungie would do. Yes, this isn't a perfect replication of CE either, but it was much more in tune with the spirit of the game and its over all plot, none of the changes were too drastic and improved the story, imo. I think if they incorporated a few elements from the Flood I think it would be even better, such as when the Marines returned to the Autumn to get supplies, but really, I think this script would be a really good building block or foundation for any eventual movie. It was very well written and including events/elements that link Halo:CE to the other two installments of the Trilogy (specifically Halo 2) made it all the better.
[Edited on 04.29.2011 5:55 PM PDT]