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Subject: Would you watch a machinima based on jun -- machinima trailer inside
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Posted by: OrderedComa
I think this could be rather interesting, and it was very good for a first working in machinima (a hell of a lot better than I would or could do). It certainly looks promising...good luck.

I'd certainly like to know what really happened to Jun after Reach, part of something I might explore in my Halo fanfic, not sure though...

thanks man.its the best I could do with windows movie maker and a low res recorder, for the actual machinima I'm going to but a new editor and recorder

  • 05.03.2011 2:39 PM PDT
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Posted by: mojeda101
Posted by: Kaiba034
Posted by: mojeda101
As what the other comments on the video say, it is pretty simple but in a way very stupid I am sorry to say. Let real canon tell us what happened to Jun, for me, it would be Fist Full of Arrows.

Oh and by the way, the knife is on his shoulder, not his chest.

your an idiot about the knife thing, if your serous, your stupidity hurts me,
Its a machinima and my take on what happened jun, ''real'' canon probably never will,
like seriously man, its a machinima, with what I thought would be an interesting story, its not supposed to be the deafinit answer as to what happened him, more of a machinima featuring him after the events of reach, in a little mini story,
no need to go back trollin' and being a dick on the video aswell just because I replied to your comment on how stupid it was because all you said was, its stupid because the knifes not in the right place...


I do not argue with someone who cannot master proper grammar. I would assume you could at least capitalize your sentences. Another thing, did you notice your wrong rant you just gave me was all one sentence?

Fist full of arrows, that is all we need to know about Jun, even Bungie supports it in one of their weekly updates. Just like A HAM5TER said, learn to take criticism, people though Avatar, Inception, The King's Speech, and other great films were horrible. We each have our own opinion, and mine so happens to be thinking your story is horrible.

Jun didn't have a story. He went with Halsey on a Pelican through a fleet of Covenant ships with cover from the UNSC until they reached CASTLE base, just like Fist full of Arrows portrays. His fate is unknown, but I would rather have it told by someone with fantastic art experience than a simple kid who cannot take criticism without crying.

Judging by your past video's, you have little to no experience with Machinima, please, give it to someone such as Globalproductions7 or Plasma Studios, they can at least put CGI in their video's. Oh and about the Knife there are several things you are missing aside from the knife.

You are also missing the backpack, along with the Bronze visor, another thing, how on earth are you going to get a voice actor to match Jun's voice? This Machinima is going to fail, but that's my opinion, go ahead and counter-argue, but that is my opinion, not a prediction.


This guy is right if you made your video after "Fist Full of Arrows" was made. If you made it before and you eventually realized someone else was doing the same thing and decided to still continue, then cheers to you and good luck. The world is harsh and they guy I quoted is a doosh bag.

I already know that

  • 05.04.2011 8:23 AM PDT



Posted by: mojeda101


I do not argue with someone who cannot master proper grammar. I would assume you could at least capitalize your sentences. Another thing, did you notice your wrong rant you just gave me was all one sentence?


Holy s**t man, you are SO F**KING PRO!!

Posted by: mojeda101
Fist full of arrows, that is all we need to know about Jun, even Bungie supports it in one of their weekly updates. Just like A HAM5TER said, learn to take criticism, people though Avatar, Inception, The King's Speech, and other great films were horrible. We each have our own opinion, and mine so happens to be thinking your story is horrible.

Jun didn't have a story. He went with Halsey on a Pelican through a fleet of Covenant ships with cover from the UNSC until they reached CASTLE base, just like Fist full of Arrows portrays. His fate is unknown, but I would rather have it told by someone with fantastic art experience than a simple kid who cannot take criticism without crying.


Okay, nothing you just said even vaguely resembled criticism, as much as tearing apart the OP's efforts then adding "only my opinion" as an attempt to justify your remarks,

Posted by: mojeda101
Judging by your past video's, you have little to no experience with Machinima, please, give it to someone such as Globalproductions7 or Plasma Studios, they can at least put CGI in their video's.


Fancy CGI =/= good story. This is going to be no worse than RvB, as far as graphics go and that is one of the most popular Halo Machinimas around.

Posted by: mojeda101
Oh and about the Knife there are several things you are missing aside from the knife.

You are also missing the backpack, along with the Bronze visor, another thing, how on earth are you going to get a voice actor to match Jun's voice? This Machinima is going to fail, but that's my opinion, go ahead and counter-argue, but that is my opinion, not a prediction.


Seriously, what the f**k?! minor differences imposed by the limitations of the game, or more specifically Bungie for some reason. It will make no difference to the quality of the final product. You can still identify the SPARTAN as Jun at a glance.

  • 05.04.2011 9:38 AM PDT


Posted by: Kaiba034
Posted by: OrderedComa
I think this could be rather interesting, and it was very good for a first working in machinima (a hell of a lot better than I would or could do). It certainly looks promising...good luck.

I'd certainly like to know what really happened to Jun after Reach, part of something I might explore in my Halo fanfic, not sure though...

thanks man.its the best I could do with windows movie maker and a low res recorder, for the actual machinima I'm going to but a new editor and recorder


You're totally welcome (except I'm not a man :P ). I look forward to seeing what you can actually do with this, who knows, you might even make a name for yourself. I'll be sure to leave some good feedback and constructive criticism once you actually start. Again good luck :D

  • 05.04.2011 12:20 PM PDT
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Posted by: OrderedComa

Posted by: Kaiba034
Posted by: OrderedComa
I think this could be rather interesting, and it was very good for a first working in machinima (a hell of a lot better than I would or could do). It certainly looks promising...good luck.

I'd certainly like to know what really happened to Jun after Reach, part of something I might explore in my Halo fanfic, not sure though...

thanks man.its the best I could do with windows movie maker and a low res recorder, for the actual machinima I'm going to but a new editor and recorder


You're totally welcome (except I'm not a man :P ). I look forward to seeing what you can actually do with this, who knows, you might even make a name for yourself. I'll be sure to leave some good feedback and constructive criticism once you actually start. Again good luck :D

Thanks

  • 05.04.2011 12:39 PM PDT

Is this like A fisful of arrows at all? Perhaps a sequel?

  • 05.04.2011 12:44 PM PDT


Posted by: Zackm1188
Is this like A fisful of arrows at all? Perhaps a sequel?


I think Kaiba's story is set after Jun has gotten Halsey to CASTLE Base.

  • 05.04.2011 1:06 PM PDT
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Posted by: OrderedComa

Posted by: Zackm1188
Is this like A fisful of arrows at all? Perhaps a sequel?


story is set after Jun has gotten Halsey to CASTLE Base.

  • 05.05.2011 7:51 AM PDT
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Posted by: keeno 111
Not ganna lie that's some terrible camera work.

Some people like it..

  • 05.05.2011 12:49 PM PDT

Ignore all the haters. It seems like the Universe forums have become a more mean recently. It actually looks good. And I'll watch it when you actually release it. Although here's some constructive criticism. You may want to change the font style bit, it seems a bit... odd I guess. And I'm pretty sure Jun wears FJ/Para Knees, but other than that you did a good job. I liked the effects and camera angles you used. Plus the energy sword stuck in the wall was a nice effect.

  • 05.05.2011 4:10 PM PDT

Jesus, i'm sorry I can't speak my opinion, I guess you guys hate the fact that I'm Latin as well?

All I have is a question, how are you going to get a voice actor for Jun?

  • 05.05.2011 4:32 PM PDT
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Posted by: OniLink147
Ignore all the haters. It seems like the Universe forums have become a more mean recently. It actually looks good. And I'll watch it when you actually release it. Although here's some constructive criticism. You may want to change the font style bit, it seems a bit... odd I guess. And I'm pretty sure Jun wears FJ/Para Knees, but other than that you did a good job. I liked the effects and camera angles you used. Plus the energy sword stuck in the wall was a nice effect.

Thanks, I forgot with to change Jun's knee-pads, there wont be much writing in the actual thing, it was really the only one I could find, I'll be using a new editor with different fonts anyway, the editor to make the trailer was just windows movie maker, I'll probably be using Sony Vegas or something,

  • 05.06.2011 8:05 AM PDT
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Posted by: OrderedComa

Posted by: Zackm1188
Is this like A fisful of arrows at all? Perhaps a sequel?


I think Kaiba's story is set after Jun has gotten Halsey to CASTLE Base.

Yep.

  • 05.06.2011 2:59 PM PDT
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I'm going to be posting a new teaser trailer shortly with the editing program that I'm going to be using for the actual machinima, stay tuned!

  • 05.08.2011 3:20 AM PDT

You think CGI is easy!? wow you are an ass.

OT:good luck, I am also working on one.

  • 05.08.2011 3:27 AM PDT

Posted by: HiredN00bs
Arrogant hyperbolic exclamations of woe? Seems like a normal day for Halo/Bungie.net.

Posted by: keeno 111
Not ganna lie that's some terrible camera work.

  • 05.08.2011 3:32 AM PDT
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Posted by: Method Man NYC
Posted by: keeno 111
Not ganna lie that's some terrible camera work.

Some people don't think so, I'm workin' on it

  • 05.08.2011 1:08 PM PDT
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Posted by: Docterweegee
You think CGI is easy!? wow you are an ass.

OT:good luck, I am also working on one.

Cool, good luck with it

[Edited on 05.09.2011 7:52 AM PDT]

  • 05.09.2011 7:52 AM PDT
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New Teaser Trailer Coming Very Soon

  • 05.10.2011 7:49 AM PDT
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+ Taking anyone interested in helping out with it!

  • 05.12.2011 12:33 AM PDT

I know this is gonna sound stupid, but Jun uses the FJ-Para knee gaurds, not the GUNGNIR....
Sorry....just had to point that out.

  • 05.12.2011 1:04 AM PDT

I would be glad to help, but only small roles, And i will not have live all summer.

  • 05.12.2011 1:58 AM PDT


Posted by: mojeda101
Jesus, i'm sorry I can't speak my opinion, I guess you guys hate the fact that I'm Latin as well?

All I have is a question, how are you going to get a voice actor for Jun?

We had to be harsh to when you were also harsh.

  • 05.12.2011 2:01 AM PDT

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