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Subject: Fan Fic help!

My Grandfather was a Desert Ranger, my Father was a Veteran Ranger in the NCR. My father was killed by Caesar's Legion and they took my Brother. It's now my responsibility to uphold the mantle of the Rangers and avenge my Father and find my Brother.

I'm thinking of making a fan fic about a team of Spartan II's codenamed Team GHOST. And they wear black or gray(undecided and they have Photo Reactive Panels like from Ghosts of Onyx. Thats just about the Spartans so what do you think? How can i improve it?

  • 05.03.2011 4:39 PM PDT

My Grandfather was a Desert Ranger, my Father was a Veteran Ranger in the NCR. My father was killed by Caesar's Legion and they took my Brother. It's now my responsibility to uphold the mantle of the Rangers and avenge my Father and find my Brother.


Posted by: Dustin 6047
Could they be Spartan IIIs with MJLINIOR armor instead of IIs. That way they can fit with pre-existing canon, but not be it.

I was thinking about that today, but then it would basically be the Headhunters. Im basing it off of Team Black. And how would it not fit into canon?

  • 05.03.2011 4:45 PM PDT

Please, no hurt! Me like Elites. Brutes stinky bad bad. Me stay here, make sure no Brutes come behind mighty Arbiter. Heh, heh... Eh?

Make them Spartan IIIs :/
SPI armor.
from ghosts of onyx

  • 05.03.2011 5:53 PM PDT

"I may not be perfect, but always been true."

Posted by: Lynk120
Make them Spartan IIIs :/
SPI armor.
from ghosts of onyx


This, perhaps some survivors from Alpha or Beta company (it would be plausible enough)

  • 05.03.2011 6:35 PM PDT
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You could not use Spartan Gray team considering that team already exists and consists of S-006 Jai, S-111 Adriana and S-??? Mike. My point being they have gray armor, so that might not work, however the choice is yours.

[Edited on 05.03.2011 6:48 PM PDT]

  • 05.03.2011 6:48 PM PDT

Why can't they use Mjolnir armour that has been outfitted with photo-reactive panals?

  • 05.03.2011 6:54 PM PDT

"I may not be perfect, but always been true."

Posted by: Omanisat
Why can't they use Mjolnir armour that has been outfitted with photo-reactive panals?


Cause, that's what active camouflage is for :P

  • 05.03.2011 6:58 PM PDT

My Grandfather was a Desert Ranger, my Father was a Veteran Ranger in the NCR. My father was killed by Caesar's Legion and they took my Brother. It's now my responsibility to uphold the mantle of the Rangers and avenge my Father and find my Brother.


Posted by: Omanisat
Why can't they use Mjolnir armour that has been outfitted with photo-reactive panals?

They can.

  • 05.04.2011 6:06 AM PDT

My Grandfather was a Desert Ranger, my Father was a Veteran Ranger in the NCR. My father was killed by Caesar's Legion and they took my Brother. It's now my responsibility to uphold the mantle of the Rangers and avenge my Father and find my Brother.


Posted by: Xinshu
You could not use Spartan Gray team considering that team already exists and consists of S-006 Jai, S-111 Adriana and S-??? Mike. My point being they have gray armor, so that might not work, however the choice is yours.

There armor just would be colored gray or black. But maybe it can change color to be like some basic camouflage. Does that sound stupid or no?

[Edited on 05.04.2011 6:10 AM PDT]

  • 05.04.2011 6:09 AM PDT