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Subject: My Halo Fan Story - Operation: Ranch Hand

Hi all,

I've only posted in these forums once or twice. I'm in the Catalyst group, but not as good as most of them... haha

That being said, I've been working on my own Halo fan story. I'm using my blog to post it in small, bite-size chunks at a time. Of course, you can go from one section to another if you want.

I'd appreciate any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. In the end, I'm writing this for me. But I would like to get feedback.

Thanks in advance for taking the time to read: Operation: Ranch Hand

  • 05.29.2011 11:09 AM PDT

Pretty nice. It was a rushed intro, maybe slow things down to clear things up. Otherwise, great descriptive words, and good dialouge.

  • 05.29.2011 4:39 PM PDT

Thanks!

My fear in writing is ALWAYS too much detail cause it can slow things down. My hope with the intro was to catch enough of your attention to want to find out more about what the hell a SPARTAN Omega is and what they are up to.

Please keep commenting as you read more (I hope you do)!

[Edited on 05.29.2011 5:10 PM PDT]

  • 05.29.2011 5:10 PM PDT