- wswartzendruber
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- Honorable Member
I'm almost done with Ghosts of Onyx, and I must say that this story is incredible. What's not, however, is the proof reading:
1. "...Robert's MA5K...Robert grabbed his MA5B..."
2. "...UNSC destroyer In Amber Clad..."
3. "...the USNC had..."
Those are a few examples.
What a shame for such a well-written book.