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Subject: Did They Ever Fix Ghosts of Onyx?

I'm almost done with Ghosts of Onyx, and I must say that this story is incredible. What's not, however, is the proof reading:

1. "...Robert's MA5K...Robert grabbed his MA5B..."
2. "...UNSC destroyer In Amber Clad..."
3. "...the USNC had..."

Those are a few examples.

What a shame for such a well-written book.

  • 05.29.2011 8:01 PM PDT

Posted by: Commander GX
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  • 05.29.2011 8:03 PM PDT

"Concise and devoid of elegance...what I have come to expect from human communication"-Endless Summer

Mine is "fixed"

  • 05.29.2011 8:07 PM PDT

"I may not be perfect, but always been true."


Posted by: Metroidman42
Mine is "fixed"

  • 05.29.2011 8:38 PM PDT

Copyright date and ISBN?

  • 05.29.2011 8:42 PM PDT

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The In Amber Clad is a destroyer... or it has been refered to as such by credible sources hence the confusion.

Also, what is wrong with #3? edit nvm, lol fail.

[Edited on 05.29.2011 8:50 PM PDT]

  • 05.29.2011 8:49 PM PDT

Vengeance only leads to an ongoing cycle of hatred.

They're are a few errors, but nothing that doesn't make sense. You've pointed out the mistakes and I bet others did too. MA5K or MA5B, same difference. Those aren't really important errors.

  • 05.29.2011 8:54 PM PDT

The In Amber Clad happens to be a frigate.

The MA5K is a carbine version of the MA5B; they are not the same.

[Edited on 05.29.2011 9:04 PM PDT]

  • 05.29.2011 9:04 PM PDT