- NightFalcon117
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Let the big man do his thing.
Posted by: mistershag
I don't normally ask for personal information, but how old are you? Sometimes you don't capitalize words at the beginning of sentences...
It's pretty good though: I like it.
Also, the word coloured is traditionally spelled "colored."
Im 19 its a quick first draft thats why Im gonna edit this all after no worries and yeah im British so I am spelling it right :P
[Edited on 06.06.2011 5:08 PM PDT]