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Subject: [FF] ODST: 7th

ZombieTM - Only zombie that doesn't like braaains... mhm huh? wait what?...

I tried to write a fan fiction about ODST's, but since not to many people got interested I quit.
I will dot out the rest now, hope you enjoyed reading it while it lasted.

[Edited on 07.09.2011 4:26 PM PDT]

  • 06.21.2011 11:57 AM PDT

ZombieTM - Only zombie that doesn't like braaains... mhm huh? wait what?...

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  • 06.21.2011 11:58 AM PDT

ZombieTM - Only zombie that doesn't like braaains... mhm huh? wait what?...

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  • 06.21.2011 11:58 AM PDT

ZombieTM - Only zombie that doesn't like braaains... mhm huh? wait what?...

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  • 06.21.2011 11:59 AM PDT

ZombieTM - Only zombie that doesn't like braaains... mhm huh? wait what?...

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  • 06.21.2011 12:01 PM PDT

ZombieTM - Only zombie that doesn't like braaains... mhm huh? wait what?...

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  • 06.21.2011 12:06 PM PDT

This last chapter seemed to be all dialogue and no motion, just all the characters standing around doing nothing, and a few characters jumped in with no forethought *cough* the Rookie, Dare, Buck *cough*. And speaking of the rookie, first of all, no one else would call him that, just his squad, and secondly, he had no purpose being in the FF at all, it just seemed to be a random cameo.

Hope you listen to my feedback. Good so far, just too short.

  • 06.21.2011 9:13 PM PDT

ZombieTM - Only zombie that doesn't like braaains... mhm huh? wait what?...

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  • 06.22.2011 2:22 AM PDT

I find this to be a very interesting fic. I always did like ODSTs, and this is this is an attention grabber for. I won't bug you with canon issues or any of that. I do agree about the last part. There seemed be almost no description to the characters actions and directions to the characters, but other than that I really like it.

  • 06.26.2011 8:40 PM PDT

If you can read this, that means I'm not a Shaolin monk...

yet.

Me like.

  • 06.27.2011 2:36 PM PDT

ZombieTM - Only zombie that doesn't like braaains... mhm huh? wait what?...

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  • 06.28.2011 5:31 PM PDT

ZombieTM - Only zombie that doesn't like braaains... mhm huh? wait what?...

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  • 07.01.2011 8:43 AM PDT

If you can read this, that means I'm not a Shaolin monk...

yet.

I still like it.

  • 07.01.2011 5:05 PM PDT

ZombieTM - Only zombie that doesn't like braaains... mhm huh? wait what?...

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[Edited on 07.09.2011 4:26 PM PDT]

  • 07.05.2011 7:50 AM PDT

ZombieTM - Only zombie that doesn't like braaains... mhm huh? wait what?...

Bye my friends. Hope you enjoyed reading ODST:7th, but unfortunatly it ends here. I tried to write a Fanfiction about ODST's but did not get to much attention as I would have liked, because of this I am putting down the pen and paper and start just beeing a normal bungie.net member.
Love you guys who actually did read it.

  • 07.10.2011 2:39 PM PDT