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Posted by: IcanHazSausage
You need to edit the music a tad. Right where "installation 04 is destroyed" the music changes suddenly. Try and merge them in and bring it in slightly.
Also, more information about the rings is needed.
Other then that...Its not bad (:
Alright! The gist of the timeline is the human perspective so I could do more fighting on it? Or do you want like more history about it?
Posted by: Dustin 6047
I think you should slow down a lot of the subtitles. I think you should also add in parts like the great schism and first strike.
I do have the schism in there, but yeah first strike sounds good. Thanks!