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Posted by: VenomfangX
you should make them back to back fighting against a common enemy.
Posted by: ZDF Fawkes
I like where it's going, but if you want it to show a trinity of characters, you might want to make Chief pay more attention to Cortana. Making him atand guard makes him look less important in the picture. Have him facing Cortana again, I like it that way.
Hitting two birds with one (actually more like twenty) stones, I'll have Arby, MC and Cortana all looking off-frame, as though there were a looming threat coming from that direction.
As for MC paying more attention to Cortana, I think an easier solution would be to simply move Cortana closer to MC, and have them looking at the same spot off-frame. Hopefully it'll communicate something to the viewer along the lines of MC is listening in on Cortana's intel, while Arby's dinosaur senses are tingling and he's all ready for action.
Er, and here's your updated pic.
Posted by: Tycho_005917
Really good work on the Marathon art piece.
I'll have more of those in the future! I really am a fan of Marathon's art direction and creature design. It's sort of hard to articulate, but the designs they use are just visually satisfying to look at.
[Edited on 07.04.2011 5:27 PM PDT]