Posted by: DespisedIcon622
Honestly I liked WjB456's montage a lot more than yours (no offense) yours was just three minutes of ninja assassinations (and one no-scope), I often found myself looking down at the time remaining bar on your montage, get more variety next time.
WjB456's montage had A LOT of variety. Exterminations, snipes, cross-map sticky grenade kills, multikills with the spartan laser, killimanjaro and others. The time on the clip and the gamertag is also absent on his montage and even the music is better. Notice how even though he has music, you can still hear the game audio, you need to work on that next time.
WjB456's montage also had a clever title, even though that might not seem like much, an attention grabbing title like that is something that can get you views in the first place.
And you had a very long ending with the credits, even though WjB79's video had credits, there was still a clip going on during it so the viewer doesn't get bored.
And another thing, I've seen you make posts about your video on other people's topics, that's spam, and if you do that then NOBODY is gonna want to watch your montage. Make sure you keep the montage where it's suppose to be.
WjB79: 9/10
Jrok09: 4/10
I am in no way bashing you, just giving you constructive criticism
thx for the feedback. the point for this montage, was only ninjas lol. with the music thing being louder than the gameplay sound, i realized that however since im new to the program i used (windows movie make, the one thats comes with windows 7) also it isnt the greatest for editing and there isnt even slo-mo which upset me. Also the credits, ya i know they r really long but its cuz i didnt want to just stop the musice in mida sone so i just made the creds for the musice to run off (hoping that people just change the video once the credits start roleing llol). Everything will be fixed for my next vid so it should be lots better lol