- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
Here is some advice......
1. Pretty good intro.......
2. Maybe you sohuld change this thread into the thread for all the episodes.
3. Video quality is pretty decent but maybe you could ask for some help to improve it.
4. Try devloping characters at the start of the series and start maybe introduce charactersmore as the story progresses, like The Codex, Red vs Blue, Fire Team Charlie, etc, etc.
5. Maybe when your series starts getting popular and popular, try and make a site for it, like the other Halo series.
All in all, if you and your friends keep improving it, and adding more story, etc etc, it will be a great series.
[Edited on 3/3/2006]