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Subject: Raptor Squad Origins

They call me The Raptor due to my extreme interest in dinosaurs specifically velociraptor.

Chapter 1: Blade Raptor's origins

In the year 2517 the beginning of the Spartan II program is underway. The candidates of this program are put into teams based on personality including Team Zulu, Alpha Team, Red Team, Blue Team, Green Team, Grey Team, Black Team, and Team Raptor. Team Raptor led by Blade Raptor whose real name is unknown is the most outspoken of these trainees and can easily influence any discussion. Team Raptor was soon broken up due to most of its members washing out or being killed in action.

As Blade Raptor enters the pitch black training room his cold blue eyes quickly adjust to the darkness allowing him to see the training equipment in front of him. As he approaches the weights three O.N.I spooks clad in dark black ODST Recon armor appear behind him. Blade Raptor sighs as the O.N.I agents approach him.

"What do you want?" asks Blade Raptor as he stares into the visor of the lead O.N.I agent, "Whatever you want I know it is not good at all."

"We want you to accept the offer that we have been asking you about" replies the lead O.N.I agent in a rough voice as Blade Raptor equips an emerald green Mjolnir ODST helmet, "This time we are not asking, this time it is an order."

"Now that you have finally figured out that you only had to order me to accept your request I guess I can handle anything you assign to me," answers Blade Raptor as he finally equips the last of his Mjolnir ODST armor, "So what do you have in mind?"

"We want you to lead a team of ODSTs, train them, and be complete bad-asses about it," replies the lead O.N.I agent as Blade Raptor smirks beneath his helmet, "Now we know that Spartans and ODSTs do not have the best of relationships but we believe you are the right guy for the job considering your past relationship with them."

"Ok," responds Blade Raptor as the O.N.I. agents lead him through the grey halls of Castle Base to the hanger where a black O.N.I pelican is waiting for them, "I accept my mission and my new team."

[Edited on 07.26.2011 6:30 PM PDT]

  • 07.26.2011 5:41 PM PDT

Hahha... to late Bub "Raptor Squad" been taken =)

Raptor Squad

otherwise, not bad, not as engaging but not bad.

  • 07.26.2011 7:27 PM PDT

They call me The Raptor due to my extreme interest in dinosaurs specifically velociraptor.


Posted by: Ghost Bn
Hahha... to late Bub "Raptor Squad" been taken =)

Raptor Squad

otherwise, not bad, not as engaging but not bad.


Damn, did not know about that.

  • 07.27.2011 1:27 PM PDT

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Ha, for a second I thought you were making a prequel to Elites of War.

  • 07.28.2011 10:23 AM PDT