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Subject: R.O.G.U.E. Machinma trailer! Please?

HALL OF SHAME

Everything I have ever said.

Not enough space, soooooo

Let us know what you think!

  • 07.27.2011 6:13 PM PDT

Cammalamm is the best.

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srry to say but it sucks
-you cant read the moving words
-crapy camangles
-i dont understand why the people are ramdomle killing thigs
-no voice
-just all around slopy

no to be a jerk but you asked

  • 07.27.2011 6:23 PM PDT

room for improvement.

  • 07.27.2011 9:03 PM PDT


Posted by: Jacob1231
can you watch my trailer?

here it is... still bad, but please just give a little consideration that it took a lot of work


way tomany transitions, if u watch a good film they have very little or none atall, usally none

  • 07.28.2011 3:04 AM PDT

Cammalamm is the best.

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Posted by: Jacob1231

Posted by: Kedron

Posted by: Jacob1231
can you watch my trailer?

here it is... still bad, but please just give a little consideration that it took a lot of work


way tomany transitions, if u watch a good film they have very little or none atall, usally none

Are you kidding me? Watch a few films why dont you? Theres transitions on EVERY scene. And the only transition I used was fade out and fade in before a few scenes.


srry jacob but yours is worse than his
also really bad music.and it makes Know sence

  • 07.30.2011 4:35 PM PDT

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This needs a LOT of work. As stated rather rudely by others.

The camera work needs a lot of attention. The jerky motions make for bad presentation. (unless its pertaining to an action scene.)

The text transition scenes could use some work was well. Try to find an interesting font.

Voice Acting. You really need to up the enthusiasm. I see this done way to often in machinma. where people use their indoor voice to half -blam- scream/monotone dialog. It's ridiculous has a negative impact on machinima. Main point here is to really get into it when your doing your voice over.


[Edited on 07.30.2011 5:10 PM PDT]

  • 07.30.2011 5:08 PM PDT