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This needs a LOT of work. As stated rather rudely by others.
The camera work needs a lot of attention. The jerky motions make for bad presentation. (unless its pertaining to an action scene.)
The text transition scenes could use some work was well. Try to find an interesting font.
Voice Acting. You really need to up the enthusiasm. I see this done way to often in machinma. where people use their indoor voice to half -blam- scream/monotone dialog. It's ridiculous has a negative impact on machinima. Main point here is to really get into it when your doing your voice over.
[Edited on 07.30.2011 5:10 PM PDT]