- Arbiter 617
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I understand there wasn't supposed to be a story, but I find you can even give the most storyless plot some sequence to it.
Like have the Spartan make his entrance, without having just cut camera shot to him fighting.
I would have logged in a guest and had him hide somewhere off to the side, and detach your camera off of him to avoid the announcer.
Camera needs a bit more reactivity to the battle, it seems to just be watching, not actually in the battle. Opening shots were nice though.