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When Reach fell, the humanity feared they have lost the war. In the end though, humanity provails. But what if the battle of Reach was supposed to be different?

The game starts out with your spartan preparing for an attack against a super carriar with sabers. Your job is to bring a bomb to the carrier's core which will destroy it's shields. Once that is done, a UNSC fleet will come in to destroy the carrier.

You start in the first mission flying to the carrier in a saber specialized for breaching a ship's hull. Through the game. At first you'll have to find your way to the carrier's core. You'll meet up with other marines. After you place the bomb in mission 7, the carrier's shields are disable and now you got to try to find a way out. In the second last mission you hear that the Prophet of Regret is trying to escape with the arbiter. Just before you were about to escape you go back to stop the prophet. In the end you die from the explosion after killing the arbiter, but the Prophet of Regret escapes.

Even though the UNSC knew the carrier was heading for Reach the didn't have enough time to prepare for the attack. The super carriers jobs were to attack Reach and end it in a quick defeat when Reach defences were down, but thats to Nolble Team and Commander that didn't happen.

Once again you get to costumize you character. You are known as commander, heritic, and demon through out the game. The game would be pretty much all on the carrier.

I.Preparations "Preparing for an attack on supercarrier" (cutscene)
II.Drifting Star "Board the supercarrier with modified sabers"
III.Road Trip "After blown off couse, you have to take a longer trip to the core"
IV.Detour "You got to find a new path after a seraph crashes into the path your about to take."
V.Lockdown "You run into some marines in the eastern hanger. The hanger door is caved in."
VI.Ambush "The covanent ambushes you on the way to the core."
VII.Destination "You are almost to the core. The covanent are not going to let you get there."
VIII.Escape Plan "Now that the Crussier's shields are down, the ship is taking massive damage. You must find another way of the ship."
IX.New Inteligence "You find another hanger with a seriph in it. You find out a prophet is on board and is escaping with the abiter."
X.Final Mission "Stop the Prophet before he escapes."

The game is just an idea. This game is ment to connect the halo trilogy, halo wars, and halo reach. With the prophet of regret, the next arbiter, and also this ship was supposed to meet up with the Long Night of Solace on reach. Because of the Drifting Star was taken down, Reach was saved from a early defeat.

  • 09.22.2011 8:41 PM PDT
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M.E.R.C
Kill them all & let god sort them out

Pretty thero. I dont quite understand but its works. never played halo 2

  • 09.23.2011 7:26 AM PDT
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Do not waste your tears, I was not born to watch the world grow dim. Life is not measured in years, but by the deeds of men.

Posted by: goldhawk
We should know better, because we are better.

Not only is this the wrong forum (should be in the Waypoint forums because they are in charge of Halo now) but you posted the same topic twice with a poll attached.

  • 09.23.2011 7:43 AM PDT
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I understand nothing because my life is a conspiracy.

Your plot lacks variety and interest. They basically did your whole idea in Long Night of Solace. If you want to make a good plot, you need some of these thing:

Characters

Variety

Some twists

Shocking moments

Epic moments

Touching moments

You want to make the person think after the game has ended
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Yours had none of those. It was basically an okay DLC mission. 0/10.

  • 09.23.2011 12:43 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

No.

  • 09.23.2011 12:45 PM PDT

and "pro" is a term used for people who make money at what they do like a professional baseball player like albert pujols

i <3 science cookies

The story line is to slow and would never go through to the new world of gaming. This isn't Mario where all you do is go find the princess. It's Halo. A game full of epic moments, plot twists, character introductions, betrayal, massive lengths of space to run around to get to the next gunfight. You idea sounds like a mixture of three levels in Halo. Truth and Reconciliation, The Maw, and Long Night of Solace. I want new and improved fan fiction not some SSDD.

  • 09.23.2011 7:52 PM PDT

Have A Nice Day!

Commander, CammCam's Queensguard; Sapphire Mod; 34th Seat, Table of Avalon(Exiled);Captain, HAND

yolo? -blam!- that! YOLTOSS!! You Only Live Twice or Some -blam!-

Agreed with above assessments. The entire game is on one setting, which by default is pretty boring. If anything, you have a 1-3 mission layout that should be reduced in time. Do not let others discourage you from your ideas, but take this opportunity to better them through criticism.

  • 09.23.2011 9:17 PM PDT

Half Man.
Half Horse.
Half Machine.
All "Jerk Who's Really Bad at Math."

PS
No, I do not want to join your clan/group.

Zero.

Sorry, but what you describe is nowhere near enough for an entire game in order to make it compelling; what you have here is essentially an overly-long and drawn out version of LNoS and while I enjoyed that level, I can't say that I like it anywhere near enough to make it into a game by itself.

  • 09.23.2011 9:26 PM PDT
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Nice, OP.

  • 09.23.2011 9:47 PM PDT