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im all for assisinating,but i dont like my fingers dirty.
headlice?i dont understand english.
IM A MONITOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

chapter1

Zathron's diary
June8,2552
The prophet,has given me a very specific job;train an inexperianced Elite.His name is Pastrel,he has the swiftness of a cheetah.well,at least he is no Grunt.Although he is dumb enough to be a Brute.He has skills that can match mine,and for an Ultra,thats good.

The Covenent Ark was very cold on the feet of Zathron.For it being made from the metal,steel."it is probally to advance for the humans,"he thought as he shivered down the long dark,colorless,damp hallway."Damn,they need to give us feet warmers of something,huh pastrel?" The other Elite was speechless after his crucial training."Ah!Lighten up Pastrel!After this you will be a man,and the good thing is,your in my squad."Pastrel shivered,and had contorted his face to look like he was was smiling.Although it didn't work for the Zealot beside him.Zathron was a crimson red witha nice sky blue.Pastrel was a nice cobalt blue,and exhausted from his teacher's lessons."I guess your not as excited as I expected."

This was true.Zathron expected his apprentince to be smiling and laughing,but his disappointment meant that the Prophet must have said something to him."Look,whatever thhe Prophet said,means nothing,he's just picky and the good thing is that you've learned how to handle most standard guns.Oh!That reminds,me remember tomorow is when I teach you how to use a focus rifle and a needle rifle."Suddenly the smooth teenage voice of a high-schooler said,"I just,don't understand why I have to learn these things.The Zealot replied kindly "we are now beginning a war,with spartans.they will show no mercy for covenent soldiers like us,just thank god,that the Brutes and Hunters are on our side."

The young Ultra snickered to this thought."It's just ,just,that we were so peaceful then,and,this,this."
"Well.Just put it this way,we were the ones who started this war,so,I guess its gonna be this way for awhile."Pastrel had sighed and thanked his teacher for everything he had done,then had entered his station.


I will post the rest when i have the time if anybody likes this please leave comments.

  • 09.30.2011 2:58 PM PDT
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im all for assisinating,but i dont like my fingers dirty.
headlice?i dont understand english.
IM A MONITOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sorry for the grammer,its hard to look at a piece of paper and type on the computer.

  • 09.30.2011 3:10 PM PDT

@accordingto343

Your one stop shop for all of 343's fabulous errors and ridiculous notions in the Halo lore.

Go to the Gallery Forum.

  • 09.30.2011 3:31 PM PDT
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im all for assisinating,but i dont like my fingers dirty.
headlice?i dont understand english.
IM A MONITOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thank you for telling me i wasnk=t sure which forum to post this on,i have moved it already to the gallery if you want to read it

  • 10.04.2011 4:35 PM PDT

Why are you here?

His name is Pastrel,he has the swiftness of a cheetah.

lolwut

  • 10.04.2011 5:46 PM PDT

United Armed Forces

1: Look up Sangheili names, and mimic that. The names you've created would not fit in society.

2: Name each of the species by what the Sangheili call them. San 'shyuum, Jiralhanae, Unggoy, et cetera.

3: Sentence structure.

4: Cheetas exist on Earth.

5: There are less than one hundred spartans. A minor Elite is the match of a Spartan in all but experience and skill. A zealot is EASILY the match of any of the spartans.

6: Sangheili hate the Jiralhanae. Hunters are Lekgolo - not really the things you're thinking of.

7: A trainee would not be an Ultra.

8: The Sangheili are far from peaceful. They are essentially the military might of the Covenant - being a warrior is something Sangheili train for their entire lives.

9: If they're wearing their armor, why are their feet cold?

10: What is a covenant "Ark"? There would be no need for anything remotely like an Ark for the covenant in 2525.

I'm sorry to burst your bubble, but to really write something like this, you need to learn a LOT more about the Halo universe.

  • 10.04.2011 6:07 PM PDT

and "pro" is a term used for people who make money at what they do like a professional baseball player like albert pujols

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Posted by: GnadeMasta
1: Look up Sangheili names, and mimic that. The names you've created would not fit in society.

2: Name each of the species by what the Sangheili call them. San 'shyuum, Jiralhanae, Unggoy, et cetera.

3: Sentence structure.

4: Cheetas exist on Earth.

5: There are less than one hundred spartans. A minor Elite is the match of a Spartan in all but experience and skill. A zealot is EASILY the match of any of the spartans.

6: Sangheili hate the Jiralhanae. Hunters are Lekgolo - not really the things you're thinking of.

7: A trainee would not be an Ultra.

8: The Sangheili are far from peaceful. They are essentially the military might of the Covenant - being a warrior is something Sangheili train for their entire lives.

9: If they're wearing their armor, why are their feet cold?

10: What is a covenant "Ark"? There would be no need for anything remotely like an Ark for the covenant in 2525.

I'm sorry to burst your bubble, but to really write something like this, you need to learn a LOT more about the Halo universe.
Also, if you are going to do this make sure you are accurate among the other books. Books are way more informative than the games and in Contact Harvest it describes more about the San 'shyuum and Sangheili war and the formation of the Covenant because of the war.

  • 10.04.2011 7:09 PM PDT