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Subject: [Anecdote] Believe

Thanks!

Good luck with your story as well! I just wish the Gallery can get a bit more of a population.

There's already another story bubbling up quite nicely in my head. It's just that Glasslands might churn up my whole plot... but I don't want to wait until Glasslands is released, since it's at the end of the month. The whole thing is sorta Sangheili based... (but not your typical Sangheili stuff ;) )

Did I just say that out loud? SPOILERZ.

[Edited on 10.13.2011 3:40 AM PDT]

  • 10.12.2011 3:23 AM PDT
Subject: [Story] Believe

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!


Posted by: S p h 1 n X O 7
Thanks!

Good luck with your story as well! I just wish the Gallery can get a bit more of a population.

There's already another story bubbling up quite nicely in my head. It's just that Glasslands might churn up my whole plot... but I don't want to wait until Glasslands is released, since it's at the end of the month. The whole thing is sorta Sangheili based... (but not you typical Sangheili stuff ;) )

Did I just say that out loud? SPOILERZ.
Do it! Do it do it do it. Don't worry about Glasslands.

  • 10.13.2011 2:49 AM PDT

Oh sweet. Did you read the excerpts of Glasslands? Prologue and chapters one and two?

Aside from a few apparent mistakes in canon and some personal dislikes, I really, really , REALLY can't wait! Oh boy, it looks pretty AWSUM!

  • 10.13.2011 3:39 AM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!


Posted by: S p h 1 n X O 7
Oh sweet. Did you read the excerpts of Glasslands? Prologue and chapters one and two?

Aside from a few apparent mistakes in canon and some personal dislikes, I really, really , REALLY can't wait! Oh boy, it looks pretty AWSUM!

Yeah, same. Can't wait for Primordium either.

  • 10.14.2011 10:08 PM PDT

Hummmm.

Have been smoothing out the story for my next... story. I think I'm gonna write something longer this time, which should be cool.

  • 10.15.2011 4:36 AM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!


Posted by: S p h 1 n X O 7
Hummmm.

Have been smoothing out the story for my next... story. I think I'm gonna write something longer this time, which should be cool.
Oh lawd. Can you give us the scoop on what it'll be on?

  • 10.16.2011 11:59 PM PDT

Relax. I'd rather not piss this thing off.

-Master Chief

Very nice short story, are you going to write another?

  • 10.17.2011 12:08 AM PDT
Subject: [Short Story] Believe (COMPLETE)

Posted by: MadMattbeast
Very nice short story, are you going to write another?

Thanks! Hope you enjoyed.

[Edited on 10.17.2011 12:46 AM PDT]

  • 10.17.2011 12:46 AM PDT
Subject: [Story] Believe


Posted by: OfTheBloodguard

Posted by: S p h 1 n X O 7
Hummmm.

Have been smoothing out the story for my next... story. I think I'm gonna write something longer this time, which should be cool.
Oh lawd. Can you give us the scoop on what it'll be on?

So far, I'm laying out a certain amount of chapter amounts. No idea how many it's going to turn into, though. I doubt it would be uber long, but hopefully it should span out a bit further.

As for what I'm writing about, the word 'Sangheili' should be enough information for a couple of days... or weeks... maybe a few months.

  • 10.17.2011 12:49 AM PDT

Sounds like you left it wide open for a sequel. Fighting for a better life or something like that.

You know...because it's boxing...they're fighting...they want to be free of dirty places...yeah nevermind.

Halo Database would have loved to see this.

  • 10.17.2011 2:19 PM PDT

No u

No doubt Spartan. No doubt.

  • 10.17.2011 2:59 PM PDT


Posted by: Spartan1995324
Sounds like you left it wide open for a sequel. Fighting for a better life or something like that.

You know...because it's boxing...they're fighting...they want to be free of dirty places...yeah nevermind.

Halo Database would have loved to see this.


Haha, maybe I did. I have considered giving this a sequel, but other than that the thought never really grew. I might go back to these guys, in the future, and flesh them out a bit more. Introduce the other protagonists and give them more character.

Sorry, what is Halo Database? I'm pretty sure I've heard about it before.

  • 10.17.2011 9:50 PM PDT

I'll be posting updates to newer stuff in this thread from now on, so it's pretty much a blog at the same time! Just saying.

  • 10.19.2011 11:19 PM PDT

Halo Database a group for fan fiction. You've heard of us?

  • 10.25.2011 2:24 PM PDT

Yup, I have. I'll take a closer look at it now.

  • 10.26.2011 4:06 PM PDT

Update 1:

Just got my greedy little hands on Halo Glasslands! Just hoping it doesn't cleave my next story in half. But I'm fairly certain I'm all good.

As for the story itself, I haven't started writing PROPERLY yet, but the main flow of the story is mainly planned out. Told you guys I take way too much time with my writing.

  • 11.01.2011 1:38 AM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!

Cool stuff! I hope to hear more news soon, man.

  • 11.01.2011 3:10 AM PDT

An Intrepid, Heroic member? Congrats!

Now, off to Glasslands!

  • 11.01.2011 7:08 PM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!

;) enjoy it. Make sure to read the Universe threads on the book afterwards too, they're pretty insightful.

  • 11.02.2011 2:56 AM PDT

I don't understand all the hate on it. It just seems to be more character-driven, and I love it so far.

Do you have the book yet?

And massive update to my story, I managed to add another sentence to my expanding first paragraph!

  • 11.03.2011 4:00 AM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!

Mmhmm, I do. I didn't think it was too bad, but some parts bugged me a little bit. But, hey, that's just how Karen rolls. She obviously has a different style of writing, and I can't judge her on such a thing.

I know the feel of only writing a sentence a day... that's pretty much every day for me. :|

  • 11.03.2011 4:43 AM PDT

Yeah. From what I've read so far, the human bits are quite a decent read. But the scenes concerning Sangheili, like Jul, are a bit of a disappointment so far. It just feels she didn't display them... good enough. Not saying I want them all to be honourable and all that, but they sorta feel undeveloped as one of the main races in the game. There was so much more she could do to flesh them out and make them seem real , but unfortunately, right now I'm veering towards a conclusion that they wouldn't get enough detail they deserve.

  • 11.03.2011 10:18 PM PDT

Major update.

Finished planning out the entire story. Pretty much wrote what would happen in most chapters, etc, etc, and ascertained my characters (even though their names or personalities haven't been made). I just know what they'll do and what species they are so far...

So far, so good, so I shall get cracking with the writing soon!

Now, if only I can finish more than a sentence a day, if that...

  • 11.06.2011 9:30 PM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!


Posted by: S p h 1 n X O 7
Now, if only I can finish more than a sentence a day, if that...
I know that feel. :(

  • 11.07.2011 5:15 AM PDT

Whoop.

Sorry, but there shall be a little break from Glasslands...

I have waited far too long for Inheritance.

  • 11.09.2011 1:34 AM PDT